RyanB03 Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 Guys i'm finally back! I got a new computer so now I can continue my NFL series here. Alright, so I've made the Bears and the Bengals, so, without further ado, here they are!Bears:New stripe on helmet, shoulder and pantsOrange facemask instead of greyMoved GSH from shoulder to above facemask on helmetBengals:All black on shoulders of jerseysWhite Bengal tiger stripes on sides of shouldersBlack home pantsWhite away pants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BVZ Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 Good work on these concepts. I like the placement of the GSH, always felt like it got somewhat lost in the sleeve striping. The helmets stripes are fine but I feel like the orange facemask sticks out, I would change that to navy. I also don't think the orange cuffs on the home uniform work well with the striping. Keep up the solid work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 Redid the Bears here. I tried to do a navy facemask for them, but it was just too much navy for one helmet, so experimented with white, I'll see what you guys think. I also made the cuffs navy to stabilize the jersey cuz it looked awkward for an all navy blue jersey to have random orange cuffs. So, anyway, here it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 30, 2015 Author Share Posted December 30, 2015 I've got the Browns done here, so I'll show you guys:Browns:Front shoulder stripe stops at line instead of stretching fartherWider helmet and pants stripeAdded colored color to both home and way sets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 really like moving GSH to the front bumper for the Bears, thats a smart move. i think you need to go gray or blue for the facemask though - a white mask on that dark navy would be an extreme contrast that is just too jarring. i think you pretty much fixed the Browns. if they're going in that direction, you've executed the ideas better than Nike did, and they look more like a modern Browns uniform  GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE  /  MEDIUM /  DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted December 30, 2015 Author Share Posted December 30, 2015 So I got the Cowboys done here, no update for Cleveland as the only person to comment about it said nothing was wrong, so I changed nothing. But, anyway, here's Dallas:Dallas:Blue helmet instead of grey (basically an invert of their alternate)Blue pants on home instead of the bluish-grey that killed every NFL fanconsistent shoulder stripe for both jerseysGrey-blue-white-blue-grey stripe on helmet and pants instead of blue-white-blueSame blue color for home and away sets instead of the lighter blue for the home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 id like to see a word mark on the chest for dallas i think it would look sharp. I'm for going with the blue helmet but i think a single stripe on the helmet and pants would look better, but thats just personal preference Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
29texan Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 As a Cowboy fan... no... I'm sorry but... no.(I could deal with the rest of the uniform, but just the helmet alone ruins it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted January 1, 2016 Author Share Posted January 1, 2016 Happy New Year everyone! So, I have an update here for Dallas. So first, I changed the helmet from blue to white and vice versa for the star. I also made the helmet stripe blue-white-blue and that copied over to the away pants and on the home pants its white-blue-white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canuckleball Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 I don't like the fonts for Chicago or Cleveland. The Bengals shoulder yoke feels clunky and overpowering. I know you don't like using wordmarks, but Cincy's numbers are so low they are screaming for one. Either move the numbers up tighter to the collar or add a wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Great work on fixing the browns! Â Â Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 I like the concepts, but the lack of TV numbers just give me a feeling that its not complete. The numbers on the chest are just way too low, move them up a bit closer to the collar and it should look better. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 i really like the Cowboys designs if they were an expansion team and starting from scratch. although, the update is very close to the Colts. but i think such a drastic change to the Cowboys uniform would cause riots in the streets. im pretty sure 29Texan just threw his computer out the window! with a team like this, being such a huge brand, you can't just focus on aesthetics. yes, this uniform design is very solid, but it doesn't feel like a Cowboys uniform. you've got to keep something from the old brand and personally, i wouldn't touch the helmet. do what you want with the rest of it, but to make any change to the helmet is not a good move IMO Â GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE Â / Â MEDIUMÂ / Â DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted January 2, 2016 Author Share Posted January 2, 2016 Changed Dallas again here. I decided to just go back to the original helmet used in their actual uniforms to leave some sort of uniform history on there. Also, another minor change, I made the socks grey instead of white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted January 5, 2016 Author Share Posted January 5, 2016 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil B. Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 3rd cowboy set is the best of the 3. I do think the white helmet would work great as an alternative. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
San Diego Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 Big fan of the Cardinal jerseys. You should try the Ravens with the gold pants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB03 Posted January 5, 2016 Author Share Posted January 5, 2016 Alright, so Denver is now finished for our 10th team, so here it is:Denver:Orange helmet, blue facemaskJersey stripes (I guess) pretty much a Buccaneers and Bengals comboUsed helmet stripe as pants stripe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canuckleball Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 Denver: No wordmark, no TV numbers, bad name font, weird side panels, anorexic stripes, and an orang-verdose on the home set. But Dallas looks sweet, so that's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milkman14 Posted January 5, 2016 Share Posted January 5, 2016 I like Dallas but my only suggestion would be to repeat the helmet stripe on the pants, silver blue white blue silver. I'm not entirely sure it would work on the white pants but I feel like both pants need some silver. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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