wquarton Posted December 12, 2015 Share Posted December 12, 2015 Hey guys, doing a project for a local bike relay. Its a contest and theres prize money to be won, so really let me have it! Cheers! KCIBR = Kluane Chilkat International Bike Relay. Still pretty rough stage but any feedback welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted December 13, 2015 Share Posted December 13, 2015 I like the general direction but the font is pretty illegible. Also, I'd make the mountains a bit less symmetric. I can tell that they're mountains, but they also look like they're forming a giant 'M' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 a little update. Still have a couple weeks before the deadline but quite a bit happier. Not 100% sold yet, CC as always, appreciated edit: i see the little black lines in there on the sun. I'll fix them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted January 6, 2016 Author Share Posted January 6, 2016 lightened the spokes up a bit(dad couldn't even see them haha) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted January 7, 2016 Share Posted January 7, 2016 Your latest version is an improvement. Is that "I" supposed to be what the trail looks like? What if you made the letters thicker, then put the trail inside the I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted January 7, 2016 Author Share Posted January 7, 2016 Your latest version is an improvement. Is that "I" supposed to be what the trail looks like? What if you made the letters thicker, then put the trail inside the I?Yeah it is. Sure I could try that, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KentuckyX Posted January 7, 2016 Share Posted January 7, 2016 Just a two cent add. By looking at your logo I'm assuming that's the snow peak of a mountain? If that's the case I'd suggest defining the mountain sides a bit more. If it's the whole mountain it looks a bit out of place just dropped in there sort of floating. I also second the idea of bolder text with the course in the "i". Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted January 9, 2016 Author Share Posted January 9, 2016 another little update. couple more tweaks to do but getting close I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 You should make the inside of the wheel either all white or all yellow. That meaning the text and mountain should match, unless you make the mountain larger to fit behind the text. Looking good so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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