timberwolf Posted January 11, 2016 Share Posted January 11, 2016 Hello everyone!So the Jacksonville Jaguars have a connected but, IMO, lazy branding, especially the uniforms. Heres my quick take on their set.LOGOSThe logos are simple and straightforward. Keep the primary and alternate, although I did tweak the colours a bit to make the gold pop more (although its still an accent colour on the uniforms). The wordmark remains unchanged.UNIFORMSHeres where they need a change. A lot of concepts have them use a jaguar pattern and I played around with the sublimation, or making it black and whatnot. Eventually I settled on having a sublimation, because a) thats what Nike would do and it looks better. I kept a tapered stripe on the shoulder to add some visible design, while avoiding the current, lazy shoulder fill effect. Gold is only an accent.COMBOSHeres where I think some problems will definitely arise. I wanted a couple combos, but obviously avoiding the Oregon Ducks scheme. I dont like some of the combos, but others look great. The colour rush is one of my favourites (never thought Id say that).There ya go, ya filthy animals! Have fun with it! C+C is much appreciated.Credits to the maker of this template (I can't find it in the PDN Paradise thread anymore), Conrad Burry for the fonts, and the motherboard for the logos... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DCarp1231 Posted January 11, 2016 Share Posted January 11, 2016 Love the simple design. I really don't understand why everyone who does a Jaguars concept seems to always use sublimated jaguar spots. Not a big knock on you, but think outside the box. Overall great concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted January 11, 2016 Share Posted January 11, 2016 I don't think I like white striping on the teal, I think black would work better. The white pops but it's a bit distracting. Going back to the solid black helmet is safe but I think the black with teal from the last uniform set is a stronger helmet. Echo the sentiment of the sublimated print doesn't do anything for me and from the TV wouldn't be noticeable. I'd like to see that switched out with stronger shoulder striping.All in all it's a cleaner look for a team that definitely needs a clean up but I think Jacksonville is a team that (if done correctly) would look good in something a little non traditional. B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoE38_Concepts Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 I would love to see these on the field. @noe38concepts (Instagram - Twitter) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
generalshepherd141 Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 Color Rush is all black? Other than that nice job, the colors flow nicely together and there are not any outrageous combos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted January 12, 2016 Author Share Posted January 12, 2016 edit- wrong thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StrongXStyle Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 the helmet logo looks a little small, i'll add shoulder numbers on the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted January 12, 2016 Author Share Posted January 12, 2016 Alright so here's the first update everyone! Literally no reasoning, just thought it'd be modern and cool-looking... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
San Diego Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 I like the pants but that's about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WissX Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 Your missing the white socks  I am the guy who loves Wisconsin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canuckleball Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 I get that you're going for minimalism, but I think the teal jersey needs some more gold and less white. I prefer the spots over the stripes, but they both work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucknut42 Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 I think a gold facemask would make the helmet pop more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 Keep the first design. I feel that it is a lot better than what you made recently. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted January 12, 2016 Author Share Posted January 12, 2016 I appreciate all the comments! I'll continue some editing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted January 12, 2016 Share Posted January 12, 2016 Alright so here's the first update everyone! Literally no reasoning, just thought it'd be modern and cool-looking...This looks great. But I would still recommend putting the shield on the jersey like it currently sits. I've gotten used to it and I think it distinguishes them well against other teams. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted January 14, 2016 Author Share Posted January 14, 2016 Thanks for feedback....while I mess around with some edits for the Jags....Miami Dolphins....simple but effective.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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