FroBroStudio Posted January 21, 2016 Share Posted January 21, 2016 Hello! This logo is a response to the fact that the South Florida Metro Area is once again, getting a Major League Soccer (MLS) team in the foreseeable future. As always, feel free to critique and I will answer questions when I have the time available. Also, here's a link to the project: Miami SC/96 - MLS Design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted January 21, 2016 Share Posted January 21, 2016 Digging the color scheme, but I'm afraid your palm tree looks like a sea turtle (which does fit Miami, but still.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMtexan09 Posted January 21, 2016 Share Posted January 21, 2016 i really liked the colors and the crest overall but i have to agree with Whittier since that palm tree looked like sea turtle. Try to fix the palm tree a bit more but the other parts on crest are great. it does fit a Miami team FEAR THE FROG! LET'S GO TCU!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoopsCoach55 Posted January 21, 2016 Share Posted January 21, 2016 Great concept, and I actually like the sea turtle/palm tree logo, it fits with the theme and colors of the team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted January 21, 2016 Share Posted January 21, 2016 This is all really well done. I like the colors, the crest, the kits and the presentation. That said, I can't unsee the turtle now. I do like were you were headed with #4 in your logo progression, too. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FroBroStudio Posted January 22, 2016 Author Share Posted January 22, 2016 On 1/21/2016 at 0:52 AM, Whittier S said: Digging the color scheme, but I'm afraid your palm tree looks like a sea turtle (which does fit Miami, but still.) You're absolutely right! Even I didn't notice the sea turtle until I finished this project. Woah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FroBroStudio Posted January 22, 2016 Author Share Posted January 22, 2016 Ok, so I've seen the sea turtle and decided to fix the logo a little bit. Although the "Sea Turtles" or "The Snapper Legion" can be fan club names. And here's the revised logo.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FroBroStudio Posted January 22, 2016 Author Share Posted January 22, 2016 23 hours ago, jdp said: This is all really well done. I like the colors, the crest, the kits and the presentation. That said, I can't unsee the turtle now. I do like were you were headed with #4 in your logo progression, too. Well, since David Beckham is the main investor, he might have the logo be similar to Manchester United. But it just didn't feel like it belong in Miami. Perhaps in a future project, I'll use the logo along with the turtle imagery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FroBroStudio Posted January 23, 2016 Author Share Posted January 23, 2016 I've decided to do one more revision so that it looks like a palm tree and a soccer ball more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted January 23, 2016 Share Posted January 23, 2016 YES. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMtexan09 Posted January 25, 2016 Share Posted January 25, 2016 much better and now I like it alot! FEAR THE FROG! LET'S GO TCU!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoopsCoach55 Posted January 25, 2016 Share Posted January 25, 2016 As much as I kind of enjoyed the turtle, the update is amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FroBroStudio Posted February 6, 2016 Author Share Posted February 6, 2016 Last update - The sea turtle in question.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatsSoSpursy Posted February 6, 2016 Share Posted February 6, 2016 I've seen plenty of concepts for a Miami MLS team, and i think this is the best one. Just the colors you used and the ball/palm tree is just a great idea. A+ for you good sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted February 7, 2016 Share Posted February 7, 2016 This is a really nice concept, and definitely gives off a Miami vibe IMO. I will say I prefer your first update to the sea turtle/palm tree. The one-color rendering gives the logo some much needed simplicity with the three strokes around the shield, and it still reads as a ball and palm tree to me. I'd also consider spacing out the text a little as well so it fills out the chevron a better. Maybe take the width of the green stroke and space the text that distance from the edges of the chevron. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted February 7, 2016 Share Posted February 7, 2016 I like the Sea Turtle more than the Tree.... & i feel the original pulled off both, which is a great tie to Miami. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axe Posted February 9, 2016 Share Posted February 9, 2016 I like what you did with the green and orange for Miami. Though I would love to see an orange/green/orange kit or vice versa, to make good use of the colour scheme you have there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted February 9, 2016 Share Posted February 9, 2016 Too cool. Nice work all around. This is my only qualm, what if the waves on both sides got gradually smaller either top-to-bottom or larger bottom-to-top? Right now, they seem kind of static/ plopped on, so anything to make them flow smoother. Maybe you render them as one fluid shape, versus 3 of the same being repeated. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted February 9, 2016 Share Posted February 9, 2016 On January 22, 2016 at 0:46 PM, cwilz305 said: Ok, so I've seen the sea turtle and decided to fix the logo a little bit. Although the "Sea Turtles" or "The Snapper Legion" can be fan club names. And here's the revised logo.... Love this version. What would the right one look like with an inverted soccer ball? A green circle(with no break from the palm fronds) dark panels, and the current green panels now the sand color. I wasn't feeling the original, but I could see this turning out nicely. Good work! @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FroBroStudio Posted February 11, 2016 Author Share Posted February 11, 2016 On 2/9/2016 at 5:35 PM, raysox said: Love this version. What would the right one look like with an inverted soccer ball? A green circle(with no break from the palm fronds) dark panels, and the current green panels now the sand color. I wasn't feeling the original, but I could see this turning out nicely. Good work! And now I'm wondering myself what it looks like inverted. To the drawing board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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