CanucksBrad Posted February 12, 2016 Share Posted February 12, 2016 I've had a hell of a time working on creating a couple of my own logos. I have no skill or training for this kind of thing, that much is obvious. So I guess I'll just post what I have and hope some of you more talented people can guide me. So here is an Eagles logo I've been working on, for a city starting with "V" (could work for a couple hockey teams I have in mind. The first is a full eagle on top of a V, and the second is a V with 3 eagle tallons forming an E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 12, 2016 Share Posted February 12, 2016 34 minutes ago, CanucksBrad said: I've had a hell of a time working on creating a couple of my own logos. I have no skill or training for this kind of thing, that much is obvious. So I guess I'll just post what I have and hope some of you more talented people can guide me. So here is an Eagles logo I've been working on, for a city starting with "V" (could work for a couple hockey teams I have in mind. The first is a full eagle on top of a V, and the second is a V with 3 eagle tallons forming an E. im not a fan of the secondary, the primary i think there is too much green. also your colors are really bold try to dim them a little changing the saturation a bit. also i think the lines of green in the eagle is a little over kill. Some more shadow values, you started but its not perfect, mabye a color change will help that. And finally i would put an outline around it. You have the idea now you just need to express it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted February 12, 2016 Author Share Posted February 12, 2016 17 minutes ago, llfhockey said: im not a fan of the secondary, the primary i think there is too much green. also your colors are really bold try to dim them a little changing the saturation a bit. also i think the lines of green in the eagle is a little over kill. Some more shadow values, you started but its not perfect, mabye a color change will help that. And finally i would put an outline around it. You have the idea now you just need to express it. Can you be more specific? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted February 12, 2016 Author Share Posted February 12, 2016 OK, attempt #2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 13, 2016 Share Posted February 13, 2016 20 hours ago, CanucksBrad said: Can you be more specific? more add some lines and groves were feathers part inside wings kind of like when you draw grass you add v abd m shapes in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 13, 2016 Share Posted February 13, 2016 second attempt is much better but still room for improvment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted February 13, 2016 Author Share Posted February 13, 2016 Anything specific? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted February 13, 2016 Author Share Posted February 13, 2016 Here's another one I've been looking on. For a team called the "Stingers". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted February 14, 2016 Author Share Posted February 14, 2016 Any thoughts on the last 2 logos I've posted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 I feel your linework is too thin, especially on your eagle and the wings of your bees. You have made tremendous strides from your first eagle to your second, so keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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