JLNHLSEGAFAN Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 I decided to start up a fantasy league known as the Earth Hockey League. It starts off with four teams: Washington Speedsters (US) Victoria Foxes (CAD) Tokyo Roses (JPN) Mexico Reds (MEX) The rosters are filled with NHLers. The rosters will be released soon. Here's where they'll play: Washington: Verizon Center (where the Capitals play) Victoria: Save-On-Foods Memorial Centre (where the Royals play) Tokyo: The Big Hat (where the ice hockey events in the 1998 Olympics were held) Mexico: Monterrey Arena Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerseyJimmy Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 The fonts are absolutely terrible, it looks like you drew this in MS Paint, "Speedsters" is the worst name I've ever heard for a hockey team, the Mexico team plays in Texas, and I don't think anything needs to be said about the Sonic characters. Stop. Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLNHLSEGAFAN Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 1 minute ago, Jimmy Lethal said: The fonts are absolutely terrible, it looks like you drew this in MS Paint, "Speedsters" is the worst name I've ever heard for a hockey team, the Mexico team plays in Texas, and I don't think anything needs to be said about the Sonic characters. Stop. Please. Wwwoooowww. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerseyJimmy Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 How old are you, anyway? Ten? Seriously, learn the basics of jersey designing before you just puke something out onto the forums. Like, say, coloring inside the lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLNHLSEGAFAN Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 Just now, Jimmy Lethal said: How old are you, anyway? Ten? Seriously, learn the basics of jersey designing before you just puke something out onto the forums. Like, say, coloring inside the lines. 15. And... Do that one more time, or you're gonna get bad luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerseyJimmy Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 5 minutes ago, JLNHLSEGAFAN said: 15. And... Do that one more time, or you're gonna get bad luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLNHLSEGAFAN Posted March 4, 2016 Author Share Posted March 4, 2016 I posted these concepts on the forums already, but I got the most negative feedback. I need more positive feedback. Can anyone give any? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 I don't want to say anything until I know how old you are, and what your thoughts were with the designs. Everybody's got to start somewhere, so I don't want to judge the obvious lacking quality here if this is one of the first times you've posted a concept. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcj882000 Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 You know, when I saw this topic in the sidebar I thought the title would refer to something a bit more serious than "people on another site don't like my concepts". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DG_ThenNowForever Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 "Something's Wrong" is not the topic I'd expect for the Sonic the Hedgehog hockey/NASCAR jersey mashups. But it is likely the most apt. Nice work. 1 hour ago, ShutUpLutz! said: and the drunken doodoobags jumping off the tops of SUV's/vans/RV's onto tables because, oh yeah, they are drunken drug abusing doodoobags Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chcarlson23 Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 Some positive feedback is that the ideas aren't that bad... But that's about where it ends, unfortunately. These are really rough... First off the shoulder yoke shouldn't eat into the NOB. Also the actual picture for a logo doesn't work to well... And this place is filled with sport logo and uniform enthusiasts, so you're going to get a lot of "hate" on your concept that really is constructive criticism, to help you in your concept making. Now I'm not trying to put you down, I'm just letting you know that your not going to get a pat on the back every single time you post something. You're going to have to use the criticism to make your concept better. "And those who know Your Name put their trust in You, for You, O Lord, have not forsaken those who seek You." Psalms 9:10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 WHERE'S SHADOW????? MAKE A CHAO GARDEN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 Why the Sega characters? What’s your reasoning behind picking them? Why does your Washington jersey have 87 on the back, and 26 on the sleeves? What’s your rationale behind hearts on a Roses jersey? Or a Reds jersey that has very little red in it? Whatever program you’re using, take your time. Work on one design at a time. Pencil sketch, scan, refine. And relax. It’s a message board. "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 You wanna know what's wrong? Not everyone is going to give you positive feedback. It happens. Don't take it personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 "Negative" comments are positive. It means someone took the time to consider your work and give you feedback to help you improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 Not trying to be mean. None of us are. But honestly, if you think a team, any team, let alone a pro team filled with NHLers, is going to wear any of those, even hypothetically, saying you're mistaken would be an understatement. Best advice I have for you is to look around these boards and learn what makes a good concept good. Also, I don;t know what program you're using, but I'd suggest watching some tutorials on the tools that the program has to offer. The pencil/pen tool generally should be avoided. As should the fill bucket. Hope I helped, and good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLNHLSEGAFAN Posted March 4, 2016 Author Share Posted March 4, 2016 1 hour ago, Jimmy! said: Why the Sega characters? What’s your reasoning behind picking them? Why does your Washington jersey have 87 on the back, and 26 on the sleeves? What’s your rationale behind hearts on a Roses jersey? Or a Reds jersey that has very little red in it? Whatever program you’re using, take your time. Work on one design at a time. Pencil sketch, scan, refine. And relax. It’s a message board. First of all, that was my intention for the logos. Second of all, I originally had 26 on the back. Third of all, the hearts were also intended. Fourth of all, the Reds preview jersey was supposed to be mainly red. Lastly, I use a program called ibispaint for the main designs, while another program, called Phonto, is used for applying the numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLNHLSEGAFAN Posted March 4, 2016 Author Share Posted March 4, 2016 2 hours ago, CS85 said: I don't want to say anything until I know how old you are, and what your thoughts were with the designs. Everybody's got to start somewhere, so I don't want to judge the obvious lacking quality here if this is one of the first times you've posted a concept. I'm 15. Plus, I've been on these boards for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerseyJimmy Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 Seriously, though, why does the damn Mexico team play in Texas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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