wquarton Posted March 10, 2016 Share Posted March 10, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted March 10, 2016 Share Posted March 10, 2016 Um... any information we should know? Personally, I'd need to know more about the team's identity, location, etc before commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted March 10, 2016 Share Posted March 10, 2016 Background would be helpful, but there are a couple objective things to mention: The guns have a white stroke while the badge has a gray stroke. I'd make those the same. The Foothill FC font is too generic, and could stand to be smaller; it's too close the guns at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted March 10, 2016 Share Posted March 10, 2016 Right now, the guns are too detailed and that takes away from the cleanliness and the feel of the logo, and will make it hard to reproduce at small sizes or in certain mediums like embroidery. Remember that, with logo design (or most any art, really), you can get away with representative, not realistic. Also, is it FOOTHILL FC or FOOTHILLS FC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marble21 Posted March 10, 2016 Share Posted March 10, 2016 Everything above is good C&C. Try to make your stroke widths even too. Right now the two grey strokes of the shield shape are uneven and the white stroke around the guns does not match either of those either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted March 11, 2016 Author Share Posted March 11, 2016 Yeah, thanks. All good feedback. Scrapped this, its just a clunker. Other than the crest shape. I guess I should have put the redo in this thread but I was dumb and created a new one. Its probably on the front page if you guys are interested in where this went. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CanucksBrad Posted March 11, 2016 Share Posted March 11, 2016 I don't get the military connection, assuming this is based in Calgary, AB. They are not much of a military town. I liked the other one better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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