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A design of Ryan Switzer I put together. Im adding one with and without text to get feedback on both! I normally use the site to get actual feedback on my designs even though most of the threads are concept uniforms I like to design a little every now and then :)

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only concern for me would be the jaggedness of the font might seem in-congruent with the serpentine nature of The Energy Ribbon of Glory.

 

intended symbolism with The Energy Ribbon of Glory crossing over our man ryan's eyes?

 

the craft is top-notch!

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1 hour ago, Commodore Crablegs said:

only concern for me would be the jaggedness of the font might seem in-congruent with the serpentine nature of The Energy Ribbon of Glory.

 

intended symbolism with The Energy Ribbon of Glory crossing over our man ryan's eyes?

 

the craft is top-notch!

No intention by that, I noticed it after I was finished and Didnt think it affected the overall design to much. Thanks for the words!

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Sweet! First one is great, second one seems a bit empty. Great work though!

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8 minutes ago, ujju2 said:

Sweet! First one is great, second one seems a bit empty. Great work though!

yeah that was the thinking, I had finished it without the text and it felt plain so I put in the text.

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