Bruins Posted July 18, 2016 Share Posted July 18, 2016 The NHL Pacific division has a lot of potential for alternate jerseys, but most of them are pretty lackluster. So here I'm setting out to make sure the Pacific's alternates are everything that they should be and hopefully, more. First, the Coyotes. The 'Yotes didn't release an alternate with their new set so I did what I think is a good option. I decided to use their paw alternate and put all the design on the sleeves just like their Home/Away jerseys. C&C more than welcome, and any post will be liked so feel free to let me know what you think. Sharks are up next, thanks! But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted July 18, 2016 Share Posted July 18, 2016 The sleeve striping has potential, but the cuffs don't have to be coloured white. I'd match the thickness of the shoulders to that of the maroon stripe, and add a black hem "outline." For further explanation on the outline, just look at Arizona's current jerseys. The collar needs to be coloured. I get your use of the paw logo, but I feel that the howling coyote would look better on a sand jersey. (Really like the idea of a sand alt for the Yotes!) I'd also love to see TV numbers and a back to complete this concept, though I know apps could limit that, especially since this is your first time with this template. Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 18, 2016 Author Share Posted July 18, 2016 You're very right about the paw emblem, I wanted it to work but I see it doesn't. Will make necessary adjustments to design but due to the abnormal, already difficult process I use to do this, adding a back makes it twice as hard and time consuming. I sincerely apologize for that. Thanks so much for the feedback, it was really helpful. But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted July 18, 2016 Share Posted July 18, 2016 To echo @ldconcepts, I'd like to see the back, sleeve numbers, the howling logo and losing the white in favor of slightly more traditional striping, while keeping in line with their mains. The sand looks good, and I feel it's been criminally underused in their sets. The paws might look really good on the shoulders. Yes, producing the back will take more time, but it'll result in a more complete concept, and I think you'll be happier with your end product. This is a really good start, I look forward to seeing you hone it in. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 18, 2016 Author Share Posted July 18, 2016 I can make the backs happen But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 19, 2016 Author Share Posted July 19, 2016 Revised Version: I took your advice and I'm happy with the result. I was able to do the backs and numbers and I changed the logos and some colors. A pretty big overhaul, let me know what you think. Thanks so much! But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted July 19, 2016 Share Posted July 19, 2016 I like this a lot more, much more complete. I know newer teams tend to not use them, but with the fading collar, black laces might look really good, especially since it's an alt. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yayay124yay Posted July 20, 2016 Share Posted July 20, 2016 On 19 July 2016 at 1:18 PM, Bruins said: Revised Version: I took your advice and I'm happy with the result. I was able to do the backs and numbers and I changed the logos and some colors. A pretty big overhaul, let me know what you think. Thanks so much! Can you give me the template for these? Go the Blue Jays!And New Zealand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 20, 2016 Author Share Posted July 20, 2016 It's a RBK Edge template But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 21, 2016 Author Share Posted July 21, 2016 You kind of have to think outside the box when making a Sharks jersey because they've pretty much covered all their bases already. That includes use of orange which they hardly use at all but still technically include in their color palette. I completely ignored teal in this concept and I decided to keep their current design and replace all shades of teal with orange and gray. C&C would be great and as always every post is liked. Thanks! But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted July 21, 2016 Share Posted July 21, 2016 This is an i teresting concept. I would encourage using teal as an accent to help add some color to it. Also, sleeve numbers and a shoulder patch. As with your first AZ offering, a good start but needs a bit of honing in. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted July 22, 2016 Share Posted July 22, 2016 On a second look, ising teal to outlone the logo and frame in the grey striping might be a good way to go. This feels too similar to Anaheim, as it stands. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 22, 2016 Author Share Posted July 22, 2016 Revised Version: I readded teal to the logo and added teal stripes to the arms. I also added shoulder patches and sleeve numbers to complete the jersey. Let me know what you think, thanks! But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted July 22, 2016 Share Posted July 22, 2016 I think the logo needs an outline, the fin gets a bit lost, other than that, great work! Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 24, 2016 Author Share Posted July 24, 2016 For the Canucks, I decided to update their retro V jerseys in a way, by using their Johnny Canuck V logo and their old color scheme of Black, Yellow, and Red. C&C would be awesome, Thanks! But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 25, 2016 Author Share Posted July 25, 2016 Any and all suggestions will probably be used and definitely liked But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 25, 2016 Share Posted July 25, 2016 Adding numbers on shoulders would be a plus, I don't know if this design really needs a shoulder logo. I'd just make the number outline white. Really like the working you've been doing so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted July 25, 2016 Share Posted July 25, 2016 I agree. I believe numbers on the sleeves are actually required in the rules, so you're probably better off including them, automatically. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted July 25, 2016 Share Posted July 25, 2016 I just now realized that there's an A inside the Coyotes' paw logo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted July 25, 2016 Author Share Posted July 25, 2016 Thanks so much for the feedback guys, will add numbers. Oilers next! But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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