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I have been working on this concept for a local high school and need some advice on how to finish the eyes. Anyone got some ideas on how to finish up the eyes. Thanks in advance.

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Reduce the white part of the eyes by 30-40%, then add black circles that are larger than the white area so they overlap the white and black areas of the eye. Finish with a small white circular pupil. 

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Really good, I think the main thing is the eyes. They are way to full of white, make them a bit smaller and add some pupils.

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Thank you all for the feedback. I think I am close to figuring this thing out. Here is an update.

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The brows need to be angled to suggest some kind of expression. Right now the bear just looks kind of neutral. I'd also move the small white circles closer to the centre of each iris to avoid it looking walleyed.

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@officeglenn Thank you for that. I thought it had a little expression but after you mentioned it I noticed that it was lacking in that area. Here is the update. 

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