ChuckDownfield Posted August 17, 2016 Share Posted August 17, 2016 These concepts are for an upcoming fantasy football league, as always created using MS Paint. C&C is welcomed. The first team is the Mutineers. Primary Secondary Uniforms Let me know what you think! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted August 17, 2016 Share Posted August 17, 2016 I don't know how you do it, Chuck, but your logos in paint are cleaner than some I've seen done in Illustrator. The entire set looks really good, especially the crossed swords logo, but I think your numbers are a bit too low on the uniforms, particularly on the back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 17, 2016 Author Share Posted August 17, 2016 48 minutes ago, jmoe12 said: I don't know how you do it, Chuck, but your logos in paint are cleaner than some I've seen done in Illustrator. The entire set looks really good, especially the crossed swords logo, but I think your numbers are a bit too low on the uniforms, particularly on the back. Thank you! I agree that the numbers are low on the back, but they look funny on top of the stripes if they are not centered. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 17, 2016 Author Share Posted August 17, 2016 So I took jmoe12's suggestion and moved the numbers (and chest stripe) up higher. I also created an alternate uniform! Updated Primary Uniforms Alternate Uniforms As always, C&C is welcome and appreciated! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 20, 2016 Author Share Posted August 20, 2016 Second concept is for a team called the Tritons. Primary Uniforms Alternate Uniform Let me know what you think, and paint on! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 20, 2016 Author Share Posted August 20, 2016 This next concept is for a team called the Demons. Primary Logo Primary Uniforms Alternate Uniforms GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 22, 2016 Author Share Posted August 22, 2016 The next team is called the Sentinels. Primary Logo Secondary Logo Primary Uniforms Alternate Uniforms Please let me know what you think! Is anyone out there? Anyone? GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted August 22, 2016 Share Posted August 22, 2016 Tritons: The logo just seems too long. I would shortening the handle, and make the logo bigger on the helmets. Demons: Almost perfect. The only thing I would change is the white outline on the home numbers. It just clutter things up Sentinels: Beautiful. Wouldn't change a thing Once again, I'm astounded by the quality of the work you are able to produce in such a basic program. Keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 22, 2016 Author Share Posted August 22, 2016 2 hours ago, jmoe12 said: Tritons: The logo just seems too long. I would shortening the handle, and make the logo bigger on the helmets. Demons: Almost perfect. The only thing I would change is the white outline on the home numbers. It just clutter things up Sentinels: Beautiful. Wouldn't change a thing Once again, I'm astounded by the quality of the work you are able to produce in such a basic program. Keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to more! Thanks for your feedback, it is very useful! I will see what I can do and post an update. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 22, 2016 Author Share Posted August 22, 2016 jmoe12 brought up some good points, and I've got an update for 3 of the 4 teams. First is the Tritons. Primary Uniforms I increased the size of the helmet logo. I compared the primary logo with the Florida State arrow logo and decided to keep it the same size. Eventually I think I will add another logo to the mix. The next update is for the Demons Primary Uniforms I switched the order of the outline colors on the home numbers. Super simple, but fixed an issue. The last update is for the Sentinels. Third Logo Alternate Uniforms I added a third logo which I made before I posted the team originally, but it went unused. I have added this logo to the alternate jersey as the sleeve logo. As always C&C please! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 23, 2016 Author Share Posted August 23, 2016 Great afternoon everyone! I have another update on a couple teams, so let's get right into it! The first update comes in the form of a new logo for the Tritons! Primary Logo This will act as the primary mark for the Tritons. I have used it to update the uniform sets as well. Primary Uniforms I added the new logo to the pants. I have utilized it on the alternates as well. First, the updated logos for the alternate. Alternate Primary Logo Alternate Helmet Logo Alternate Uniforms I added the new logo to the sleeves in place of the old logo. Next update will be on the next post! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 23, 2016 Author Share Posted August 23, 2016 The next update is for the Demons. Full disclosure: I used Microsoft Word for help with this one. Added gradient helmets. I think this may be the best look in the league now. Primary Uniforms Alternate Uniforms I love to hear feedback, and prepare for 4 more teams coming at some point before the NFL season starts. Paint on! GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 24, 2016 Author Share Posted August 24, 2016 The next team is the Wolves. Primary Logo Primary Uniforms GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted August 24, 2016 Share Posted August 24, 2016 I think you have too many outlines on your primary logo. The thick white or grey stripe is unnecessary and clutters the logo significantly. I'd also go for grey helmets because there is no grey on the helmet or shirt and then the grey pants feel out of place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted August 25, 2016 Share Posted August 25, 2016 for the Mutineers, I'd go with yellow numbers on the away.. I'd probably go with red numbers for the Demons' away.. for a team called the "Demons", with a red logo, there's almost no red on the away uniform.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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