JLWW814 Posted October 15, 2016 Share Posted October 15, 2016 So I was browsing the site and found the Hurricanes "Canes" wordmark. Like the Sens' old 3rd, I decided to use it in a concept for a new 3rd for the Hurricanes. What do you think? This is my first concept here, so C&C is appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flames1fan Posted October 15, 2016 Share Posted October 15, 2016 Do not double post, all you did was use a template, add a red line and red outline and use a wood mark that you can hardy see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dallasstar03 Posted October 15, 2016 Share Posted October 15, 2016 15 minutes ago, Flames1fan said: Do not double post, all you did was use a template, add a red line and red outline and use a wood mark that you can hardy see. First, he didn't mean to double post and he probably didn't even know that he did. Second, a lot of people use jersey templates on the site. Third, red is a Hurricanes color. It makes sense. Fourth, the word mark on the front is seen fine from a distance. If you also meant the lettering on the back, he maybe couldn't get the actual font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flames1fan Posted October 15, 2016 Share Posted October 15, 2016 7 minutes ago, dallasstar03 said: First, he didn't mean to double post and he probably didn't even know that he did. Second, a lot of people use jersey templates on the site. Third, red is a Hurricanes color. It makes sense. Fourth, the word mark on the front is seen fine from a distance. If you also meant the lettering on the back, he maybe couldn't get the actual font. Yea i know just tried seeing most people hockey stuff all strips or basic sorry, was just saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLWW814 Posted October 15, 2016 Author Share Posted October 15, 2016 Its OK. Hoping to improve in future concepts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chcarlson23 Posted October 16, 2016 Share Posted October 16, 2016 Well it's a better start to making concepts than most people! @Flames1fan is right about a lot though... You just filled in the stitching box on the arms, and the hem stripe... Also @dallasstar03 the wordmark would be impossible to see on a jersey, because no one would ever be able to see a black wordmark on a black jersey. I also suggest sending this into hockeyjerseyconcepts.com, and get some good criticism there as well...(Mostly because I write for it ) "And those who know Your Name put their trust in You, for You, O Lord, have not forsaken those who seek You." Psalms 9:10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JLWW814 Posted October 16, 2016 Author Share Posted October 16, 2016 12 hours ago, chcarlson23 said: Well it's a better start to making concepts than most people! @Flames1fan is right about a lot though... You just filled in the stitching box on the arms, and the hem stripe... Also @dallasstar03 the wordmark would be impossible to see on a jersey, because no one would ever be able to see a black wordmark on a black jersey. I also suggest sending this into hockeyjerseyconcepts.com, and get some good criticism there as well...(Mostly because I write for it ) Thanks! I'll see what I can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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