Brett Jayroe Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Hello , I am not a professional graphics designer but I am an Industrial designer by trade. I wanted some feedback on these two logos and which you prefer. Thanks, Brett Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSO94 Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Top one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 I like the mane better on the second, but the perspective and face of the first. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 These are both a great start but I would simplify your color palette I would lose one of the blues. I like both but would give an edge to the top. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Use the top head, but ditch the black and dark blue. Add the silver where you have the honolulu blue in the mane and use the honolulu blue for the black and dark blue areas (tongue could be silver). Also switch the black for h. blue on the wordmark. Basically just use the h. blue, silve and white. The shapes all look good, but these changes (IMO) will make it a Detroit Lions concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Piggybacking what @hettinger_rl and @hugevolsfan said about losing blue/black. Wordmark is good, but I read L10NS. Is that just me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 Well, seeing as the first one isn't yours.... I guess the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Bear Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 3 minutes ago, dsaline97 said: Well, seeing as the first one isn't yours.... I guess the bottom. It's the same person I actually prefer the second. But drop the black and use silver and use only Honolulu blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted November 16, 2016 Share Posted November 16, 2016 The second is better because it would lend itself to uses beyond being just a logo IMO. i just dont see the first one on a helmet working all that well. Still though, the first one is great as a logo by itself. Amazing work overall, and I love the wordmark. I think the 2 blues are fine, I just dont care much for the black I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jlevesque Posted November 17, 2016 Share Posted November 17, 2016 I like the first one, the only thing I would change is the blue in the ear. It looks kind of like the lion has a spacer ear piercing, other than that it's really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brett Jayroe Posted November 17, 2016 Author Share Posted November 17, 2016 18 hours ago, dsaline97 said: Well, seeing as the first one isn't yours.... I guess the bottom. Look at the name I'ts me Brett Jayroe the same person.. I just recently modified the older one to try and improve it. which of the 2 perspectives is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brett Jayroe Posted November 17, 2016 Author Share Posted November 17, 2016 18 hours ago, ~Bear said: It's the same person I actually prefer the second. But drop the black and use silver and use only Honolulu blue. Thanks for realizing its the same person. The Lions have black in their unis now. Thats why I am using black. If I replace the black w/ silver then it would blend w/ the silver in the face. how do I get around this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brett Jayroe Posted November 17, 2016 Author Share Posted November 17, 2016 16 hours ago, Htown1141 said: The second is better because it would lend itself to uses beyond being just a logo IMO. i just dont see the first one on a helmet working all that well. Still though, the first one is great as a logo by itself. Amazing work overall, and I love the wordmark. I think the 2 blues are fine, I just dont care much for the black Her are the logos on the helmet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted November 17, 2016 Share Posted November 17, 2016 14 minutes ago, Brett Jayroe said: Look at the name I'ts me Brett Jayroe the same person.. I just recently modified the older one to try and improve it. which of the 2 perspectives is better. Lol, my bad. They seemed like two stylistically different logos and that tipped me off a bit. I like the line work on the bottom and how much simpler it is, but the mane highlights are a step backward for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted November 17, 2016 Share Posted November 17, 2016 1 hour ago, Brett Jayroe said: Thanks for realizing its the same person. The Lions have black in their unis now. Thats why I am using black. If I replace the black w/ silver then it would blend w/ the silver in the face. how do I get around this? Only because you asked (Im not stealing this image). Just a quick and sloppy re-color with the lions current colors and sans black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brett Jayroe Posted November 17, 2016 Author Share Posted November 17, 2016 Not bad! but if you look at the helmet image I included, don't you think it would blend in too much with the silver helmet?maybe not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brett Jayroe Posted November 17, 2016 Author Share Posted November 17, 2016 1 hour ago, dsaline97 said: Lol, my bad. They seemed like two stylistically different logos and that tipped me off a bit. I like the line work on the bottom and how much simpler it is, but the mane highlights are a step backward for me. I am including image of recommendation you had of removing highlights(lt blue) in main. also I replaced the black w/ dark blue and modified the eye as well. what you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted November 17, 2016 Share Posted November 17, 2016 Ok, we're getting a little too close to some other existing logos... like this is some strange frankenstein-composite of all these logos mashed together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted November 17, 2016 Share Posted November 17, 2016 1 hour ago, Brett Jayroe said: Her are the logos on the helmet I stand corrected. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brett Jayroe Posted November 17, 2016 Author Share Posted November 17, 2016 1 hour ago, GFB said: Ok, we're getting a little too close to some other existing logos... like this is some strange frankenstein-composite of all these logos mashed together. A lion is a lion I guess there will be similarities thanks for the accusations.. What of the 2 I did do you prefer was the question , not accusing me of ripping off other logos. In all honesty you could say the same of those examples that they ripped each other off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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