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Too similar to the Lightning/Maple Leafs for my taste. The script also looks a little hokey. Maybe just stick with the roundel? Perhaps a shoulder logo, too?

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First off, white gloves and pants are never a good idea.

Second, the stripes should be curved to match the template, and shaded where applicable.

There also isn't any shoulder numbers, the entire template isn't shown, the entire background is blue for the home jersey, and there should be some red.

Take your time with concepts, and make sure you are satisfied with everything before you post.

Also, don't get brought down with posts like this. One thing that could make your concepts get better feedback would be to learn from your mistakes.

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