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GenericUsername30, February 14, 2017 in Concepts
You might be able to make something happen with your basic idea however the biggest problem with this concept is the inconsistencies - the Jersey stripes are totally different then the short stripes. the front of the sleeve striping is different then the back of the sleeves and collar striping. Once you clean all of that up and make it consistent then you might be able to salvage something from your basic idea
You need to make it more interesting - find a much less generic font. Arch The wordMark or add some perspective to it. Put a stroke around the number on the back Things like that to make the concept more interesting The general idea which I guess is to have the number inside the circle isn't terrible but the execution needs a lot of work