_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 13, 2017 Not the best at introductions but I was searching through some old folders and found some old handrawn soccer logos and kits I'd made, would love some feedback! Introducing the Fantasy American Soccer League This is going to to be a full blown 30 team league now and I may start adding some history behind each team. Divisions EAST Atlantic Atlantic City United New York Empire New York Raiders Boston Shamrocks FC Virginia Beach Titans EAST Central Pittsburgh FC Detroit City Louisville 47' Real Orlando Twin Cities Athletics EAST Southern South Chicago Hawks New Orleans FC Washington Admirals Miami 305 Philadelphia Stars FC WEST Rocky Mountains Denver Altitude Portland SC Phoenix Firebirds San Fransisco FC Colorado Springs FC WEST Central Music City Sound Indy FC West Texas FC Oklahoma SC Houston Novas WEST Coastal Seattle United FC Los Angeles FC Los Angeles United San Diego FC San Jose SC 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 13, 2017 I'll go on and introduce the first team: Los Angeles FC 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 14, 2017 Any feedback? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VirginiaJay24 10 Posted March 14, 2017 It pretty good Only thing I dislike is that the league logo is a bit to simple 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 14, 2017 Simple as in what? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VirginiaJay24 10 Posted March 14, 2017 Like make the shield a different shape than a square 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 14, 2017 Okay I've boiled the League logo down to two new sketches I really like 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 14, 2017 And introducing Denver Altitude FC 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 15, 2017 New Orleans FC any feedback on Denver, NO, or the league logo? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bucknut42 414 Posted March 15, 2017 With New Orleans, I can't really tell what bird that's supposed to be. I think it's a pelican, but I only have that context because of the city. Most of these crests are great, though that pelican needs some work. Use some references, and clean that up. Pretty good work so far. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 15, 2017 any feedback on the league logo and yes it's supposed to be the shadow of a pelican, here's the reference I used. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bucknut42 414 Posted March 15, 2017 As for the league logo, I'm more inclined to go with the second version. The first one is a common shape, but the second one is unique. Also, the hexagon is a shape that is on a soccer ball, so that works too. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 15, 2017 Made an update to league logo i didn't really like the text at the bottom so I got rid of it and changed the shape to more of something I liked better prefer original or update and also introducing New York City Raiders c&c appreciated 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 17, 2017 The Boston Shamrocks FC would love C&C and feedback on league logo? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NSLthe2nd 18 Posted March 20, 2017 I'd feel like Boston's clash kit should be darker than the similar silver here. They have a shade of green which is definitely darker than the Raiders' green. Maybe try a green/white hooped jersey for the Shamrocks home jersey, too? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,371 Posted March 20, 2017 I don't know if it's the light but on paper the raiders are black and gold, and I'll update the green clash kit, maybe try something else with a black clash? I'll work some concepts out. And sorry for the delay, introducing West Texas FC 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
