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Grizzly Logo (Update 3/19)

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GRIZZLY BEAR HEAD LOGO

- Just for practice, decided to try my hand and a grizzly logo!

- Traced an image from online, no hand drawn steps, as that hadn't helped me out with a falcon I decided 

to simply trace it in illustrator instead.

- Eyes and Nose aren't to my liking but cant seem to find a better way to portray them both.

- Teeth may look to "sharp" or Cartoony? But help the fierceness IMO.

C&C Much Appreciated/Needed

 

Artboard 1.png

 

Inspiration Image:

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Yeah, the eyes look weird, maybe make them slanted down

 

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1 hour ago, BellaSpurs said:

A pupil may help, looks like a ghost bear right now

 

46 minutes ago, ImmortalChef said:

Yeah, the eyes look weird, maybe make them slanted down

 

Hows this? Simple Update, with slight teeth Adjustments 

 

Grizzly.png

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I would put some pupils in the eyes. It would make it seem better. 

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So the eyes and nose weren't working, so I reworked the facial detail, now have to complete the eyes and nose, but I think the newer mouth is much better.Artboard 1.png

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Much better!

 

The grey chin shape looks still a bit off and the colors need some contrast. Not a bad start, though.

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Chin and Eye update:

(I see the line in the chin, will fix later)

 

Grizzly.png

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1 hour ago, BellaSpurs said:

Better but eyes seem a little close together, or maybe it's just me:blink:

Youre right, I kinda threw them on during class today to get an Idea of what I may be looking to do in that area of the design.

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Changed the eyes, and forehead fur detail. Also Messed around with the colors a little bit!

 

New Grizzly.png

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Eyes look better, I like the forehead detail, too

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It is definitely better. I might lighten the blue so it contrasts the dark color better

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Color Way Options, just to work on color schemes, which do you think works the best??

 

1:

New Grizzly.png

 

2.

Grizzly 2.png

 

3.Grizzly 3.png

 

4.

Grizzly 4.png

 

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I'd take the second one, just because it's unique and looks good. Nice improvement over the course of this thread!

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The shading on the forehead needs polishing. So does the shading coming off the eyes; It's very raccoonish. 

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10 hours ago, Midway said:

The shading on the forehead needs polishing. So does the shading coming off the eyes; It's very raccoonish. 

Okay, glad i'm not the only who thought that haha, it totally does.

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I like the red but maybe try a brown with it, it may blend better than a darker red

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Update 3/19

- Hopefully improved the facial detailing!

 

Grizzly Update.png

 

 

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