H11K 551 Posted March 15, 2017 GRIZZLY BEAR HEAD LOGO - Just for practice, decided to try my hand and a grizzly logo! - Traced an image from online, no hand drawn steps, as that hadn't helped me out with a falcon I decided to simply trace it in illustrator instead. - Eyes and Nose aren't to my liking but cant seem to find a better way to portray them both. - Teeth may look to "sharp" or Cartoony? But help the fierceness IMO. C&C Much Appreciated/Needed Inspiration Image: 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,381 Posted March 15, 2017 A pupil may help, looks like a ghost bear right now 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ImmortalChef 254 Posted March 15, 2017 Yeah, the eyes look weird, maybe make them slanted down 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 15, 2017 1 hour ago, BellaSpurs said: A pupil may help, looks like a ghost bear right now 46 minutes ago, ImmortalChef said: Yeah, the eyes look weird, maybe make them slanted down Hows this? Simple Update, with slight teeth Adjustments 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
panthers_2012 1,413 Posted March 15, 2017 I would put some pupils in the eyes. It would make it seem better. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 15, 2017 So the eyes and nose weren't working, so I reworked the facial detail, now have to complete the eyes and nose, but I think the newer mouth is much better. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Der Kaiser 114 Posted March 15, 2017 Much better! The grey chin shape looks still a bit off and the colors need some contrast. Not a bad start, though. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 15, 2017 Chin and Eye update: (I see the line in the chin, will fix later) 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,381 Posted March 15, 2017 Better but eyes seem a little close together, or maybe it's just me 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 15, 2017 1 hour ago, BellaSpurs said: Better but eyes seem a little close together, or maybe it's just me Youre right, I kinda threw them on during class today to get an Idea of what I may be looking to do in that area of the design. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 15, 2017 Changed the eyes, and forehead fur detail. Also Messed around with the colors a little bit! 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jbadger9 89 Posted March 15, 2017 Eyes look better, I like the forehead detail, too 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
8BW14 1,414 Posted March 15, 2017 It is definitely better. I might lighten the blue so it contrasts the dark color better 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,381 Posted March 15, 2017 Better color contrast and eye detail, feet update 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 17, 2017 Color Way Options, just to work on color schemes, which do you think works the best?? 1: 2. 3. 4. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DTConcepts 2,198 Posted March 17, 2017 I'd take the second one, just because it's unique and looks good. Nice improvement over the course of this thread! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Midway 581 Posted March 18, 2017 The shading on the forehead needs polishing. So does the shading coming off the eyes; It's very raccoonish. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 18, 2017 10 hours ago, Midway said: The shading on the forehead needs polishing. So does the shading coming off the eyes; It's very raccoonish. Okay, glad i'm not the only who thought that haha, it totally does. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_DietDrPepper_ 4,381 Posted March 18, 2017 I like the red but maybe try a brown with it, it may blend better than a darker red 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H11K 551 Posted March 20, 2017 Update 3/19 - Hopefully improved the facial detailing! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
