Bulldog22 Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 I've been tasked with creating a logo to be used for a spirit wear fundraiser for my high school soccer team and I'm hoping for some criticism of my drafts. The logo is supposed to relate to the Bulldog logo I have included below. Please tell me what I can improve! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 I think your strongest look is the pentagonal option at the bottom. I'd start be cleaning it up, as your lines are not smooth in places. Secondly, the spikes on the outside are a bit fuzzy, so I'd clean those up. Finally, I'm not a fan of the "ribbon" at the bottom for Stow Soccer. Something just seems off about that part. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bulldog22 Posted March 30, 2017 Author Share Posted March 30, 2017 12 minutes ago, Dan O'Mac said: I think your strongest look is the pentagonal option at the bottom. I'd start be cleaning it up, as your lines are not smooth in places. Secondly, the spikes on the outside are a bit fuzzy, so I'd clean those up. Finally, I'm not a fan of the "ribbon" at the bottom for Stow Soccer. Something just seems off about that part. Thanks for your advice! I've been having a lot of trouble with the spikes and with the ribbon would you say it's the font, the shape... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalChef Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 The soccer ball with the Bulldog looks great but the others look really rough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted March 30, 2017 Share Posted March 30, 2017 20 minutes ago, Bulldog22 said: Thanks for your advice! I've been having a lot of trouble with the spikes and with the ribbon would you say it's the font, the shape... As for the ribbon, I feel it's cutting off the bottom of the pentagon, so it may need some separation, and the font could probably fill the area more. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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