JJ Anderes 756 Posted April 22, 2017 Hey folks, Recently I've been thinking about my personal logo. I don't really feel like it's awful, but I think it could be improved, I'm just not sure how. Any opinions/ideas are welcome... 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DTConcepts 2,190 Posted April 22, 2017 I think it's a solid design, but the word "designs" could be taken out. It seems unnecessary. I'm not sure if it'd help at all, but maybe make the square sharper on the corners? Instead of round? It's pretty good as it is, though. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NoE38_Concepts 1,679 Posted April 22, 2017 I agree. the design looks good. If you could change anything, why not make the non-negative space look like something else, if that makes sense. just a suggestion. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CS85 10,777 Posted April 22, 2017 I agree, just remove designs and keep it simple. I'd lose the shadows/effects and let it be flat. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JJ Anderes 756 Posted April 23, 2017 Some ideas based on your suggestions... 3 hours ago, Zeus89725 said: I think it's a solid design, but the word "designs" could be taken out. It seems unnecessary. I'm not sure if it'd help at all, but maybe make the square sharper on the corners? Instead of round? It's pretty good as it is, though. 3 hours ago, CS85 said: I agree, just remove designs and keep it simple. I'd lose the shadows/effects and let it be flat. 3 hours ago, NoE38 said: I agree. the design looks good. If you could change anything, why not make the non-negative space look like something else, if that makes sense. just a suggestion. I'm not exactly sure what you mean. Could you elaborate on that? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DTConcepts 2,190 Posted April 23, 2017 I think they both work. I also just realized this logo's versatility. It can be any color. It can be on any background. It can work with any branding. I prefer the second logo, but they're both good. Removing "designs" did it well. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NoE38_Concepts 1,679 Posted April 23, 2017 I mean that the diamond shape that the J and 4 are in could use their negative space to make an image, or something like that. Sorry if it isn't that clear. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kevsim1 195 Posted April 23, 2017 I think I'd connect the "J" and the "4"...the thin piece of black in between them is drawing my eye 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Tsubasa 132 Posted April 23, 2017 Just to bounce around some ideas... If you want to try a monogram treatment, the upper left quadrant of a 4 kinda includes a J. Would be interesting if you could make use of that. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JJ Anderes 756 Posted April 26, 2017 On April 22, 2017 at 9:33 PM, NoE38 said: I mean that the diamond shape that the J and 4 are in could use their negative space to make an image, or something like that. Sorry if it isn't that clear. Interesting idea, any thoughts as to what image that could be? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
