BlackBolt3

there aren't even warthogs in north carolina that's unrealistic

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Yeah, I feel like the Dash's identity is already dated, no I didn't realize how ugly warthogs actually are. Y'all really don't read this stuff, so look at the concept and tell me what I did wrong.

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The Dash's identity is dated, probably because it was so poorly conceived (the team never had a shot, named after punctuation), but your logo isn't quite ugly enough to be a proper warthog (yeah, I read the things). I think it's good, but I think it's missing some minor league charm. Right now, it looks more like a soccer crest.

 

As it stands, I think it needs a little bit more whimsical character, and it needs to be either heavily simplified or it needs an alternate mark that would look nice on a baseball cap (a WS would work).

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Maybe add a snarl to one side of that mouth and make him  a little grumpier.

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You're off to a great start. I like the subtle W in the brow. One suggestion: in the primary, if you added the impression of shoulders within the red home plate area, it could make the warthog appear more imposing.

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