Redesigning Cleveland Baseball (Uni Concepts 5/22)

[keithisgood 67]

Digitized concepts of the wordmark and the letterform Same basic typeface throughout, but some with a wishbone serif and some without. I'll probably do a uniform set once I get the home script sorted out.

[HRC4 315]

2nd option is my favorite. Nice job.

[keithisgood 67]

Found a script wordmark I'm happy with. The I looks like an I (not as much a J or a G) and it matches most of the shapes in the block typeface.

[FlyingBuckeye7 118]

I don't think the C logo within the state looks good. It looks like you took Ohio and flipped it backwards.

[jujubeans 82]

Agree that #2 is the best wordmark.

 

I didn't even realize that was Ohio and was scratching my head what the extra lines were for.

[keithisgood 67]

Agreed about the Ohio bit. Think I can make it work with a bit in the lower left? Or is it too much?

 

[BenD 70]

Really digging the new Ohio logo and I'd say the second "Cleveland" wordmark is the strongest. Will there also be uniforms with these?

[panthers_2012 1,413]

1 hour ago, keithisgood said:

Agreed about the Ohio bit. Think I can make it work with a bit in the lower left? Or is it too much?

 

That's perfect. 

[keithisgood 67]

38 minutes ago, BenD said:

Really digging the new Ohio logo and I'd say the second "Cleveland" wordmark is the strongest. Will there also be uniforms with these?

Yeah, that's the goal. Home/Away/Sunday/Throwback.

[keithisgood 67]

Gonna do a script "Cleveland" and then its on to unis.

[coco1997 3,740]

3 minutes ago, keithisgood said:

Gonna do a script "Cleveland" and then its on to unis.

 

These look tremendous. I apologize for not commenting before on this project, but I've enjoyed following the evolution of your wordmarks and logo. Excited to see how they look on some uniforms!

[keithisgood 67]

3 minutes ago, coco1997 said:

 

These look tremendous. I apologize for not commenting before on this project, but I've enjoyed following the evolution of your wordmarks and logo. Excited to see how they look on some uniforms!

It's okay; I do my fair share of lurking here so it evens out.

[raysox 2,568]

This is one of the better Tribe concepts I've seen. I would make the outline a little thicker, personally. Seems sort of like an afterthought now. I also would go to the thinner, taller LEVELAND script, on a jersey the one right above might be too wide to be big enough to be legible.

[FlyingBuckeye7 118]

New Ohio logo is 50x better!

[keithisgood 67]

2 Cleveland scripts, not sure which C to go with (or maybe scrap both and try another?) The more complex C is based of the Cleveland Naps and the plainer one the negro league's Cleveland Buckeyes. Also worried its not quite legible?

 

 

[coco1997 3,740]

I'd go with the second option. The "C" in the first version is a little too flowery. 

[MJD7 3,399]

This is really nice! I love the way you managed to combine elements of all of Cleveland's past Cs, not to mention including the great Ohio logo. It all meshes very well, which I didn't know could be done.

 

As for the wordmarks, I still like the ones that incorporate the C logo, particularly these two. This is great so far, and I'm interested to see how it develops!

 

[AHcreative 505]

I really like the idea behind the 'C' Ohio. Maybe in that empty space at the top left you could fit in a feather instead of a baseball or star. 

[keithisgood 67]

Quick n' dirty home uni concept. Note Cream replaces white. Design based on the great CLE teams of the 1990. Not sure about the name/number typeface on back; may go custom.

[coco1997 3,740]

Very nice! Try arching the NOB. I'd fill in the cream of the sleeve patch with navy, too.