Luke13T Posted May 8, 2017 Share Posted May 8, 2017 In my graphic design class, we got to do a choice project so I decided to create a baseball team. I just want to post it on here and get some feedback but won't be updating it due to me not having the correct files at my house. So without further ado: *The gray and white pants indicate they can be worn home or away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted May 8, 2017 Share Posted May 8, 2017 Overall, I like this concept.. Lots of good things going on here. Issues: **The full-body silhouette of the wolf is good, but makes for a bad partial (head only) logo.. I'd suggest either stylizing the silhouette with a bit of detail (think Detroit lions full-body logo) so it translates better to the head-only version.. Another option would be actually having the detail in the head-only version so it's more clearly a wolf.. The last option would be to slightly alter the position and angle of the silhouette so the head-only is a bit more clear (ear, head shape, mouth - better defined). ** The line-weight of the "PORTLAND" font is a bit too thin in my opinion (also for the "Est. 2017" in the roundel) I think adjusting those a bit would go a long way.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted May 8, 2017 Share Posted May 8, 2017 I agree. The partial silhouette doesn't look great, but overall this looks really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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