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The face is very confusing, becuase if that is a wing that is pointing off to the right, then why is it coming out of his eye. Also, do birds have eyebrows? I've never been a fan of gradients in logos, especialiy ones that are so small and insignificant as yours. All in all, you have a solid concept here but it needs some cleaning up.

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The position of the right eye to the beak makes the bird look like it just took a Tyson uppercut to the side of the face.

 

The beak opening should not be lining up with the forehead.

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1 hour ago, LMU said:

The position of the right eye to the beak makes the bird look like it just took a Tyson uppercut to the side of the face.

 

The beak opening should not be lining up with the forehead.

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funny, I met Mike Tyson at an airport... told him I didn't want an autograph, just for him to punch me in the arm... (he laughed, tilted his head sideways, then shoved me in the arm w/ all his force) ...Yes, I stumbled, and fell down... then he said with the famous lisp, "got what ya athsked for"  

 

I'm just not a cartoonist... and obviously attempted more than a few versions of this concept.  Wishing someone here could do a (basic) sketch the eyes / beak ... at least positioning. 

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(timeline of official O's logos through the years)

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