P.I.L.L. Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 I like the script...I'm just a bit confused as to what's happening in the O. I think the cartoon bird is the best way to go for the O's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted July 4, 2018 Author Share Posted July 4, 2018 updated 07/04/18 - major cosmetic surgery = happier bird face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted July 4, 2018 Share Posted July 4, 2018 The face is very confusing, becuase if that is a wing that is pointing off to the right, then why is it coming out of his eye. Also, do birds have eyebrows? I've never been a fan of gradients in logos, especialiy ones that are so small and insignificant as yours. All in all, you have a solid concept here but it needs some cleaning up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MSO94 Posted July 4, 2018 Share Posted July 4, 2018 Not a fan of the gradient grey . Plus you have to really look at it to figure out what your looking at and what it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardsblues02 Posted July 4, 2018 Share Posted July 4, 2018 Love the script, don’t like the gradient. Other than that, meh. Not an upgrade over what they have now. And why does the bird have one eye? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted July 4, 2018 Share Posted July 4, 2018 PicassO’s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted July 19, 2018 Share Posted July 19, 2018 The position of the right eye to the beak makes the bird look like it just took a Tyson uppercut to the side of the face. The beak opening should not be lining up with the forehead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted July 19, 2018 Author Share Posted July 19, 2018 1 hour ago, LMU said: The position of the right eye to the beak makes the bird look like it just took a Tyson uppercut to the side of the face. The beak opening should not be lining up with the forehead. https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&source=images&cd=&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=2ahUKEwiOwpGxmqzcAhXuGTQIHfnaDDgQjRx6BAgBEAU&url=https%3A%2F%2Fdeadspin.com%2F5860274%2Flaundry-basket-the-orioles-present-their-new-old-cartoon-bird-with-old-new-typo&psig=AOvVaw2XTKtwAtvFUGLov_UFhjk8&ust=1532125364948483 funny, I met Mike Tyson at an airport... told him I didn't want an autograph, just for him to punch me in the arm... (he laughed, tilted his head sideways, then shoved me in the arm w/ all his force) ...Yes, I stumbled, and fell down... then he said with the famous lisp, "got what ya athsked for" I'm just not a cartoonist... and obviously attempted more than a few versions of this concept. Wishing someone here could do a (basic) sketch the eyes / beak ... at least positioning. (timeline of official O's logos through the years) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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