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I like the script...I'm just a bit confused as to what's happening in the O. I think the cartoon bird is the best way to go for the O's

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updated 07/04/18 - major cosmetic surgery = happier bird face

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The face is very confusing, becuase if that is a wing that is pointing off to the right, then why is it coming out of his eye. Also, do birds have eyebrows? I've never been a fan of gradients in logos, especialiy ones that are so small and insignificant as yours. All in all, you have a solid concept here but it needs some cleaning up.

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Not a fan of the gradient grey . 

 

Plus you have to really look at it to figure out what your looking at and what it is. 

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Love the script, don’t like the gradient. Other than that, meh. Not an upgrade over what they have now. And why does the bird have one eye? 

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The position of the right eye to the beak makes the bird look like it just took a Tyson uppercut to the side of the face.

 

The beak opening should not be lining up with the forehead.

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1 hour ago, LMU said:

The position of the right eye to the beak makes the bird look like it just took a Tyson uppercut to the side of the face.

 

The beak opening should not be lining up with the forehead.

https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&source=images&cd=&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=2ahUKEwiOwpGxmqzcAhXuGTQIHfnaDDgQjRx6BAgBEAU&url=https%3A%2F%2Fdeadspin.com%2F5860274%2Flaundry-basket-the-orioles-present-their-new-old-cartoon-bird-with-old-new-typo&psig=AOvVaw2XTKtwAtvFUGLov_UFhjk8&ust=1532125364948483

 

funny, I met Mike Tyson at an airport... told him I didn't want an autograph, just for him to punch me in the arm... (he laughed, tilted his head sideways, then shoved me in the arm w/ all his force) ...Yes, I stumbled, and fell down... then he said with the famous lisp, "got what ya athsked for"  

 

I'm just not a cartoonist... and obviously attempted more than a few versions of this concept.  Wishing someone here could do a (basic) sketch the eyes / beak ... at least positioning. 

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(timeline of official O's logos through the years)

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