C-Squared 2,888 Posted April 24, 2018 Looking for some feedback! I have recently linked up with some local sports & marketing organizations and have some exciting opportunities coming up... I intend to create some prints of this image for Jim Kelly, Thurman Thomas, Andre Reed, & Bruce Smith to autograph & auction off as part of Jim's annual charity golf tourney in June (and hopefully some merch after that!) This is a rough first draft (forgive the watermark!) - I haven't touched this in weeks, so I'm just looking for tips to take it up a notch & make everything seem "rocki-er" & more complete... thanks, guys!! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MJWalker45 5,753 Posted April 24, 2018 I don't know if you want to add any crags or cracks on the faces but that might be something to consider, to give it that weathered look. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pianoknight 2,991 Posted April 24, 2018 Agreed. Right now they just look like grayscale cartoons. That's fine if that's the look you're going for, but I'd try to play with the tone and texture a bit to make it look more like stone. Also, Bills' Rushmore, so.... where's The Juice? 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jake3roo 413 Posted April 25, 2018 Maybe have fewer highlights? or more subtle ones? They look kinda shiny. I;d also say less perfectly round edges. Maybe more of a truncated look? 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeadFish 4 Posted April 26, 2018 If they are supposed to be rock, it all should be grey (ie hair, eyes, teeth, eye black etc) with the black as outlines and shadow only. I think that will make them look less like grayscale cartoons. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JTswag187 67 Posted April 26, 2018 They need rougher edges, also where's OJ? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Htown1141 1,493 Posted April 26, 2018 8 hours ago, JTswag187 said: They need rougher edges, also where's OJ? If only this was made in September!!! also I echo what people have said above, and maybe work more on making the rocks in the background look similar to the heads. I like the idea a lot and i hope you keep working on this 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
