HyamesField Posted July 8, 2018 Share Posted July 8, 2018 I'm rebranding one of my baseball teams in my fictional league, the National Baseball League, from the Miami Pirates to the Florida Flamingos. I want them to be bright, exciting, Miami-esque and I'm just having trouble getting it to where I want it. Any and all C&C is appreciated. Thanks friends! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Section30 Posted July 8, 2018 Share Posted July 8, 2018 I would suggest extending the flamingos neck to the circle so it doesn't look cut off. Minnesota Amateur Hockey League MAHL Wiki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HyamesField Posted July 9, 2018 Author Share Posted July 9, 2018 Take two is below. The pink circle still looks a bit uneven to me. I'm going to have to play around with that. Do you guys like the different background? I also made the pink pop more. If you're going to use pink, you better use it! Any and all C&C appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReesDaKing Posted July 9, 2018 Share Posted July 9, 2018 The first logo could be the main logo, and the second logo could be a tropical alt. And where is the NBL Big Baller Brand is successful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted July 9, 2018 Share Posted July 9, 2018 Pretty good logo so far. I’d try something other than a gradient for that sunset. Execution issues: the circle doesn’t appear completely round—looks a little smushed still. Likewise the text is unevenly placed (the I in Flamingo has more space below it than above it). Also the second outline of the head has some sharp angles that would look better rounded, especially around the beak. Good vibe to this logo for a Florida team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HyamesField Posted July 26, 2018 Author Share Posted July 26, 2018 Took me a few weeks but I've finally finished the concept for this. Let me know what you guys think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 Use shadow on the flamingo. Looks a bit clip-art-esque currently Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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