JordanMFrank Posted August 12, 2018 Share Posted August 12, 2018 Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dont care Posted August 12, 2018 Share Posted August 12, 2018 Looks more like “If” than what I assume you are trying to do is “Jf”. Move the feather down or find a new way to display it to fix your problem. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac the Knife Posted August 12, 2018 Share Posted August 12, 2018 Is it a stylized "H," an "HF, or maybe an "If?" Not to be critical, but I honestly cannot tell. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanMFrank Posted August 12, 2018 Author Share Posted August 12, 2018 My initials; JF. Maybe separate the JF more, And I agree with the lowering of the Feather. Any thoughts on the Imagery part? I feel there is room for improvement to make it fit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DG_ThenNowForever Posted August 13, 2018 Share Posted August 13, 2018 If it's JF, then you need a different font: It's different, but not different enough. At least for me. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanMFrank Posted August 13, 2018 Author Share Posted August 13, 2018 32 minutes ago, DG_Now said: If it's JF, then you need a different font: It's different, but not different enough. At least for me. Aww nuts... (get it?) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanMFrank Posted August 13, 2018 Author Share Posted August 13, 2018 Updates: Tweeks and a new feather, hopefully revealing more of the JF to make it easier to recognize. Still not too comfortable on the "Imagery" choice... Need some insparation from somewhere... And not choosing colours yet. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac the Knife Posted August 13, 2018 Share Posted August 13, 2018 Thought #1: Pick a case with the "JF." All upper or all lower, but pick one. Thought #2: Consider slanting the "JF" to the right to give a sense of forward motion. Thought #3: I'm not sure what the symbolism of the feather is intended to convey. If it isn't obvious it needs to be ditched - or made obvious. Thought #4: What is "Imagery" as you see it? When I think "imagery," the first thought that comes to my mind, honestly, is bull****." 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanMFrank Posted August 13, 2018 Author Share Posted August 13, 2018 8 hours ago, Mac the Knife said: Thought #1: Pick a case with the "JF." All upper or all lower, but pick one. Thought #2: Consider slanting the "JF" to the right to give a sense of forward motion. Thought #3: I'm not sure what the symbolism of the feather is intended to convey. If it isn't obvious it needs to be ditched - or made obvious. Thought #4: What is "Imagery" as you see it? When I think "imagery," the first thought that comes to my mind, honestly, is bull****." These are all good thoughts, Thank you for giving me something to think about going forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted September 20, 2018 Share Posted September 20, 2018 I like the dual case, as it lends itself well to similar shapes with the J and the F, but the context of the feather and the intended meaning of "imagery" are both very cloudy and confusing.. I'd simplify a bit as others have suggested Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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