JordanMFrank 5 Posted August 12, 2018 Thoughts? 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dont care 3,642 Posted August 12, 2018 Looks more like “If” than what I assume you are trying to do is “Jf”. Move the feather down or find a new way to display it to fix your problem. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mac the Knife 1,244 Posted August 12, 2018 Is it a stylized "H," an "HF, or maybe an "If?" Not to be critical, but I honestly cannot tell. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JordanMFrank 5 Posted August 12, 2018 My initials; JF. Maybe separate the JF more, And I agree with the lowering of the Feather. Any thoughts on the Imagery part? I feel there is room for improvement to make it fit better. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DG_Now 10,269 Posted August 13, 2018 If it's JF, then you need a different font: It's different, but not different enough. At least for me. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JordanMFrank 5 Posted August 13, 2018 32 minutes ago, DG_Now said: If it's JF, then you need a different font: It's different, but not different enough. At least for me. Aww nuts... (get it?) 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JordanMFrank 5 Posted August 13, 2018 Updates: Tweeks and a new feather, hopefully revealing more of the JF to make it easier to recognize. Still not too comfortable on the "Imagery" choice... Need some insparation from somewhere... And not choosing colours yet. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mac the Knife 1,244 Posted August 13, 2018 Thought #1: Pick a case with the "JF." All upper or all lower, but pick one. Thought #2: Consider slanting the "JF" to the right to give a sense of forward motion. Thought #3: I'm not sure what the symbolism of the feather is intended to convey. If it isn't obvious it needs to be ditched - or made obvious. Thought #4: What is "Imagery" as you see it? When I think "imagery," the first thought that comes to my mind, honestly, is bull****." 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JordanMFrank 5 Posted August 13, 2018 8 hours ago, Mac the Knife said: Thought #1: Pick a case with the "JF." All upper or all lower, but pick one. Thought #2: Consider slanting the "JF" to the right to give a sense of forward motion. Thought #3: I'm not sure what the symbolism of the feather is intended to convey. If it isn't obvious it needs to be ditched - or made obvious. Thought #4: What is "Imagery" as you see it? When I think "imagery," the first thought that comes to my mind, honestly, is bull****." These are all good thoughts, Thank you for giving me something to think about going forward. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WavePunter 2,090 Posted September 20, 2018 I like the dual case, as it lends itself well to similar shapes with the J and the F, but the context of the feather and the intended meaning of "imagery" are both very cloudy and confusing.. I'd simplify a bit as others have suggested 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
