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Been working on a Browns concept logo. Here is the primary version, with a few variations. Please give me feedback so I can figure out where to go next. I'll post the secondary soon.

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So far I'm liking B the best. The idea's there, but something feels a bit off about all of them.

 

If I were you, I'd consider a version where the letters don't extend all the way to the top and bottom.

I'd also make the letters a lot thicker, maybe into more of a block font style.

Also, maybe give it a double outline, white then orange, to match the famous helmet stripe.

 

Here's a quick sketch of what I mean:

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Still, you're pretty close, and it'll just take some tweaking. I look forward to the secondary!

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I’d make the C and B more symmetrical. Think Warner Bros. logo. Forget about the vertical B line being the center line... the B overpowers the C too much.

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It’s a great idea, I like what you have but the letters should be bolder. I think that would really help it. As said above, great idea, it’s pretty close to being awesome.

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Love 'A' - the subtlty of the CB is the best part of the Whole concept imo.  

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I made the "CB" more symmetrical and thicker, and wove the laces in between with brown lines dropped at the bottoms for contrast. Here is a look at the other logo I'm working on. Very rough, but it's basically a "Cb" in the shape of a helmet. The "C" is formed by the outline of the shell and with the helmet stripe. The "b" is supposed to work as the face mask.

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LOVE your new football.   I'm curious what it would look like with the letters even thicker, like maybe 33% thicker. The main thing you'd lose is the laces being the same width as the two letter edges, but I think it would still work.  

 

Not feeling the helmet at all.  My brain alternates between seeing two different things.  One is a coffee cup, the second is a fruit of some kind, with the b looking like a sad stem and leaf that's fallen over and is drooping on the side now.   The football logo is strong, and I'd definitely stick with that.  

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