DawgPacPBH Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Well, i havent done much in a while, but i was messing around with ideas and got this. its kind of rough...but lets see what you guys have to say.EDIT - New Version in my Next Post peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 i love the lines, but i believe it should be all red, since it is a cardinal. also, id like to see the eyes chnged to something not completely black. great idea though. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 well i completely forgot a cardinal was red. arent i a effing genius? haha. i have a new version in the works..and i think its at least a few times better...ill do a bit of work then show the new version peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrodsep Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Looks like chicken little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 Version 2 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grish Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 To much like the old blue jays logo, which makes me think of baseball or a red canary. Sorry..does not have the cardinal feel to me... "Try not to have a good time ... This is supposed to be educational."- Charles Schulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braden Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Go to sleep little birdie! Awww!No, seriously... good job, but it looks too cute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidwestEagle Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 i agree with Braden, looks a little bit like the little ckicken from Looney Tunes. If it was my concept, Id sharpen the lines and give it a sleeker, meaner feel. Still, waaaaaay better than anything i could have done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 okay, i quickly put together all of the ideas ive been given, except the eyes, which i dont think are done yet. what do you think? C&C please.VERSION 3 peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
klasticono Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 There's something off about it.... Maybe if you flipped it horizontally it would work better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 would look better the other way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 ??? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunderstruk Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 Nice tries but I really don't see them working. The last one doesn't really resemble a bird. Sorry but no! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 The logo doesn't say cardinals to me. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 17, 2004 Author Share Posted August 17, 2004 anymore C and C? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gordie Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 The crest might look more cardinal-like if you curved it in the opposite direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 Maybe if you removed the home plate-lookin' thing on his neck and tilted the head up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted August 17, 2004 Author Share Posted August 17, 2004 any better? little bit of change goin on.should i kill the whole 3/4 kind of view? and use this concept for a profile view? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 that...good quality but it doesn't really seem like a cardinal for some reason. keep trying, though, you'll get it. A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thunderstruk Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 any better? little bit of change goin on.should i kill the whole 3/4 kind of view? and use this concept for a profile view? Much improved a little more tweeking perhaps. I think you are getting there though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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