DawgPacPBH 57 Posted August 16, 2004 Well, i havent done much in a while, but i was messing around with ideas and got this. its kind of rough...but lets see what you guys have to say.EDIT - New Version in my Next Post 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
andrewharrington 4,991 Posted August 16, 2004 i love the lines, but i believe it should be all red, since it is a cardinal. also, id like to see the eyes chnged to something not completely black. great idea though. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DawgPacPBH 57 Posted August 16, 2004 well i completely forgot a cardinal was red. arent i a effing genius? haha. i have a new version in the works..and i think its at least a few times better...ill do a bit of work then show the new version 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jrodsep 572 Posted August 16, 2004 Looks like chicken little 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commish2 38 Posted August 16, 2004 To much like the old blue jays logo, which makes me think of baseball or a red canary. Sorry..does not have the cardinal feel to me... 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Braden 37 Posted August 16, 2004 Go to sleep little birdie! Awww!No, seriously... good job, but it looks too cute. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MidwestEagle 1 Posted August 16, 2004 i agree with Braden, looks a little bit like the little ckicken from Looney Tunes. If it was my concept, Id sharpen the lines and give it a sleeker, meaner feel. Still, waaaaaay better than anything i could have done. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DawgPacPBH 57 Posted August 16, 2004 okay, i quickly put together all of the ideas ive been given, except the eyes, which i dont think are done yet. what do you think? C&C please.VERSION 3 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
klasticono 0 Posted August 16, 2004 There's something off about it.... Maybe if you flipped it horizontally it would work better. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mings 577 Posted August 16, 2004 would look better the other way 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thunderstruk 0 Posted August 16, 2004 Nice tries but I really don't see them working. The last one doesn't really resemble a bird. Sorry but no! 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quantum 5 Posted August 16, 2004 The logo doesn't say cardinals to me. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DawgPacPBH 57 Posted August 17, 2004 anymore C and C? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gordie 250 Posted August 17, 2004 The crest might look more cardinal-like if you curved it in the opposite direction. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vicfurth 376 Posted August 17, 2004 Maybe if you removed the home plate-lookin' thing on his neck and tilted the head up? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DawgPacPBH 57 Posted August 17, 2004 any better? little bit of change goin on.should i kill the whole 3/4 kind of view? and use this concept for a profile view? 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Discrim 1,310 Posted August 17, 2004 that...good quality but it doesn't really seem like a cardinal for some reason. keep trying, though, you'll get it. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thunderstruk 0 Posted August 17, 2004 any better? little bit of change goin on.should i kill the whole 3/4 kind of view? and use this concept for a profile view? Much improved a little more tweeking perhaps. I think you are getting there though. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites