puckcool22 Posted April 20, 2003 Share Posted April 20, 2003 Here is a pretty basic Lightning concept. It is the same core colors and logo, except I incorporated a little silver into the striping. The striping is what there current road numbers are. Let me know what you think.Bolts! (who won big time today) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puckcool22 Posted April 20, 2003 Author Share Posted April 20, 2003 sorry, wrong link, here is the real onebolts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted April 21, 2003 Share Posted April 21, 2003 sorry. looks like something that's been done before. A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puckcool22 Posted April 21, 2003 Author Share Posted April 21, 2003 where? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roger Clemente Posted April 21, 2003 Share Posted April 21, 2003 Looks extremely plain. Good try though.--Roger "Time?" Clemente. Follow me on Twitter if you care: @Animal_Clans.My opinion may or may not be the same as yours. The choice is up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puckcool22 Posted April 21, 2003 Author Share Posted April 21, 2003 I know, it is plain. I was just goin for not a huge upgrade, because I like there general look, but not the design of the jersey itself. One of these days I'll try to create a whole new look for the lightning. However, the black, blue, silver is a great color set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted April 21, 2003 Share Posted April 21, 2003 eehhhh, its a little too plain for my liking, but nice try, and just for further notice, there is an edit post feature which allows you to change the post without actually posting again...this take care of worthless "oops i messed up posts" GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted April 21, 2003 Share Posted April 21, 2003 It isn't very inspiring. It's not bad or anything, but if you've got an itchin' for replies, this jersey ain't gonna be scratchin'.It's covered territory. The cut and logo are unoriginal. The colour scheme is great, I agree, but if you want to get noticed, my best suggestion would be to break new ground. However, I applaud your continued efforts, and encourage you to keep posting.In response to improving this concept, try tinkering with the colour placement (ie. blue and black switch places?), maybe do something creative with the trim (lightning is jagged, perhaps the trim could reflect this?), or, if you're really ambitious (and not afraid to fail), try and become the second person to impress me with a Tampa Bay Lightning concept logo (for the record, Avenger-whatswashisname was the first). The production work on this jersey is fine (though the silver seems to be a little all over the place - look closely), but there aren't any shoulder/sleeve numbers (available thanks to Roger Clemente) or back view of the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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