chcarlson23 1,000 Posted July 3 The script over the state looks fantastic!! Just included the northernmost tip of Minnesota. It’s not complete with out it 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ProfessorBigShots 64 Posted July 3 I think it would look a little better if there was some red included 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JJ Anderes 697 Posted July 3 (edited) BUFFALO SABRES EDIT: The secondary logo is inspired by the Buffalo city flag. Edited July 3 by JJ Anderes 5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KittSmith_95 1,059 Posted July 4 I get what you were going for with the secondary logo, however with it being so small on the shoulders, I don't like it. I think a updated variation of the B-Sword or S-Sword would be much better on the shoulders. Besides that, I really like this. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
appleclock 248 Posted July 5 The wordmark is clever. I like that idea. The secondary logo... I get the connection to the flag, but all I’m seeing is a lot of stabbing. Maybe put the buffaslug in that logo instead. People might rejoice. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MCM0313 2,085 Posted July 5 On 7/3/2019 at 7:26 PM, JJ Anderes said: BUFFALO SABRES EDIT: The secondary logo is inspired by the Buffalo city flag. It looks pretty good, Dahlin ()... I don't much care for the white shoulders on the blue sweater. That's my only criticism. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
B-mer 768 Posted July 5 On the home, i feel like for the white yoke to really work there needs to be white in the arm/hem stripes. It's far too unbalanced as is. That or no contrasting yoke i suppose. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JJ Anderes 697 Posted July 9 I think it looks better without the yoke. I've also started working on some event branding ideas for when the teams are done, so here's a teaser for that. 5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OhioSportsMan61 1,067 Posted July 9 Oh snap hockey in the Shoe! 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blindsay 107 Posted July 10 On the alternate: could you make the Dallas script into the one currently used? Also for the Sabres , could you put the two swords where the striping is on the alternate? Good work! 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheGoldenTriangle 104 Posted July 10 Ooh, nice work. The only thing I dislike is the shoulder patch on the home and away, maybe a recolored alternate logo would work better? 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JB Designs 426 Posted July 10 Sabres - I feel like a white eye and horn would do some good on the road. Maybe even white text in the body too. Stars - I (Texas-raised, hockey-crazed Canadian) love the shoulder patch on the primaries, tho I think it needs to be larger in the current mock up. And I think a recolored version would make a better helmet logo for the alt rather than simply slapping a Texas flag on there. Didn't like the star-stitched numbers at first glance, but its a pretty cool take on a part of the jersey that is almost always neglected outside of specialty looks. Great work on these and on the rest of the series that precedes! 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OhioSportsMan61 1,067 Posted July 10 Beautiful work on the Stars! 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
B-mer 768 Posted July 11 Dallas is really great. Some awesome small details. Like the hanger effect flag, and I didn’t notice the star stitching until a previous comment, but that’s a great subtle feature and a nice alternative to sublimating something in there. One thing perhaps wrong I see is the yoke stripes on the back don’t match the front on the home and away. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
appleclock 248 Posted July 11 I like the D flag logo. I also like the diagonal script logo. The hanger effect flag and star stitching are clever. The only thing I don’t like is the primary—I might have just stuck with their current logo and not the Texas outlined one. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AkramTheBoss 5 Posted July 11 I love your style 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JJ Anderes 697 Posted July 21 WINNIPEG JETS 8 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
~Bear 529 Posted July 21 Love the uniforms and the new alternate logos, but I think the primary without the shadow looks very flat. Maybe add back a shadow, but not nearly as much contrast as the current logo. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DastardlyRidleylash 322 Posted July 21 I don't think it needs a shadow, but keeping the darker grey outline around the primary logo's jet would probably help the logo feel more defined. As it is, the logo feels really flat. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
