chcarlson23 Posted July 3, 2019 Share Posted July 3, 2019 The script over the state looks fantastic!! Just included the northernmost tip of Minnesota. It’s not complete with out it "And those who know Your Name put their trust in You, for You, O Lord, have not forsaken those who seek You." Psalms 9:10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProfessorBigShots Posted July 3, 2019 Share Posted July 3, 2019 I think it would look a little better if there was some red included Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ Anderes Posted July 3, 2019 Author Share Posted July 3, 2019 BUFFALO SABRES EDIT: The secondary logo is inspired by the Buffalo city flag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted July 4, 2019 Share Posted July 4, 2019 I get what you were going for with the secondary logo, however with it being so small on the shoulders, I don't like it. I think a updated variation of the B-Sword or S-Sword would be much better on the shoulders. Besides that, I really like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted July 5, 2019 Share Posted July 5, 2019 The wordmark is clever. I like that idea. The secondary logo... I get the connection to the flag, but all I’m seeing is a lot of stabbing. Maybe put the buffaslug in that logo instead. People might rejoice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCM0313 Posted July 5, 2019 Share Posted July 5, 2019 On 7/3/2019 at 7:26 PM, JJ Anderes said: BUFFALO SABRES EDIT: The secondary logo is inspired by the Buffalo city flag. It looks pretty good, Dahlin ()... I don't much care for the white shoulders on the blue sweater. That's my only criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B-mer Posted July 5, 2019 Share Posted July 5, 2019 On the home, i feel like for the white yoke to really work there needs to be white in the arm/hem stripes. It's far too unbalanced as is. That or no contrasting yoke i suppose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ Anderes Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 I think it looks better without the yoke. I've also started working on some event branding ideas for when the teams are done, so here's a teaser for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 Oh snap hockey in the Shoe! My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ Anderes Posted July 10, 2019 Author Share Posted July 10, 2019 DALLAS STARS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blindsay Posted July 10, 2019 Share Posted July 10, 2019 On the alternate: could you make the Dallas script into the one currently used? Also for the Sabres , could you put the two swords where the striping is on the alternate? Good work! Im an isles,rangers,devils,Sabres,Yankees,Mets,Braves,hawks,knicks,nets,bills,giants,falcons,and jets fan. So? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGoldenTriangle Posted July 10, 2019 Share Posted July 10, 2019 Ooh, nice work. The only thing I dislike is the shoulder patch on the home and away, maybe a recolored alternate logo would work better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JB Designs Posted July 10, 2019 Share Posted July 10, 2019 Sabres - I feel like a white eye and horn would do some good on the road. Maybe even white text in the body too. Stars - I (Texas-raised, hockey-crazed Canadian) love the shoulder patch on the primaries, tho I think it needs to be larger in the current mock up. And I think a recolored version would make a better helmet logo for the alt rather than simply slapping a Texas flag on there. Didn't like the star-stitched numbers at first glance, but its a pretty cool take on a part of the jersey that is almost always neglected outside of specialty looks. Great work on these and on the rest of the series that precedes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted July 10, 2019 Share Posted July 10, 2019 Beautiful work on the Stars! My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B-mer Posted July 11, 2019 Share Posted July 11, 2019 Dallas is really great. Some awesome small details. Like the hanger effect flag, and I didn’t notice the star stitching until a previous comment, but that’s a great subtle feature and a nice alternative to sublimating something in there. One thing perhaps wrong I see is the yoke stripes on the back don’t match the front on the home and away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted July 11, 2019 Share Posted July 11, 2019 I like the D flag logo. I also like the diagonal script logo. The hanger effect flag and star stitching are clever. The only thing I don’t like is the primary—I might have just stuck with their current logo and not the Texas outlined one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkramTheBoss Posted July 11, 2019 Share Posted July 11, 2019 I love your style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ Anderes Posted July 21, 2019 Author Share Posted July 21, 2019 WINNIPEG JETS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Bear Posted July 21, 2019 Share Posted July 21, 2019 Love the uniforms and the new alternate logos, but I think the primary without the shadow looks very flat. Maybe add back a shadow, but not nearly as much contrast as the current logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ridleylash Posted July 21, 2019 Share Posted July 21, 2019 I don't think it needs a shadow, but keeping the darker grey outline around the primary logo's jet would probably help the logo feel more defined. As it is, the logo feels really flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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