JJ Anderes

Redefining the NHL (9/12 - Added Red Wings)

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The script over the state looks fantastic!! Just included the northernmost tip of Minnesota. It‚Äôs not complete with out it ūüėČ

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BUFFALO SABRES

 

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EDIT: The secondary logo is inspired by the Buffalo city flag.

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I get what you were going for with the secondary logo, however with it being so small on the shoulders, I don't like it. I think a updated variation of the B-Sword or S-Sword would be much better on the shoulders. Besides that, I really like this. 

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The wordmark is clever. I like that idea.

The secondary logo... I get the connection to the flag, but all I’m seeing is a lot of stabbing. Maybe put the buffaslug in that logo instead. People might rejoice.

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On 7/3/2019 at 7:26 PM, JJ Anderes said:

BUFFALO SABRES

 

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EDIT: The secondary logo is inspired by the Buffalo city flag.

It looks pretty good, Dahlin (;))...

 

I don't much care for the white shoulders on the blue sweater. That's my only criticism.

 

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On the home, i feel like for the white yoke to really work there needs to be white in the arm/hem stripes.  It's far too unbalanced as is.  That or no contrasting yoke i suppose.  

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I think it looks better without the yoke.

 

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I've also started working on some event branding ideas for when the teams are done, so here's a teaser for that.

 

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On the alternate: could you make the Dallas script into the one currently used? 

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Also for the Sabres , could you put the two swords where the striping is on the alternate? Good work!

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Ooh, nice work. The only thing I dislike is the shoulder patch on the home and away, maybe a recolored alternate logo would work better?

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Sabres - I feel like a white eye and horn would do some good on the road. Maybe even white text in the body too.

 

Stars - I (Texas-raised, hockey-crazed Canadian) love the shoulder patch on the primaries, tho I think it needs to be larger in the current mock up. And I think a recolored version would make a better helmet logo for the alt rather than simply slapping a Texas flag on there. Didn't like the star-stitched numbers at first glance, but its a pretty cool take on a part of the jersey that is almost always neglected outside of specialty looks.

 

Great work on these and on the rest of the series that precedes!

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Dallas is really great. Some awesome small details. Like the hanger effect flag, and I didn’t notice the star stitching until a previous comment, but that’s a great subtle feature and a nice alternative to sublimating something in there. 

 

One thing perhaps wrong I see is the yoke stripes on the back don’t match the front on the home and away. 

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I like the D flag logo. I also like the diagonal script logo. The hanger effect flag and star stitching are clever. The only thing I don‚Äôt like is the primary‚ÄĒI might have just stuck with their current logo and not the Texas outlined one.

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I love your style

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Love the uniforms and the new alternate logos, but I think the primary without the shadow looks very flat. Maybe add back a shadow, but not nearly as much contrast as the current logo. 

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I don't think it needs a shadow, but keeping the darker grey outline around the primary logo's jet would probably help the logo feel more defined. As it is, the logo feels really flat.

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