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PantherXVI

Mr. Redlegs Modernization

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I haven't designed since 2012, so go easy on me. Not completely finished, but wanted to get some feedback. 

 

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Looks really good, I do have a couple suggestions though.

 

First off I would add a black outline where the red sleeves meet his hands. And secondly I would make the shadow on the back of the ball effect the red stitching on the ball as well as the white of the ball. I'd also get rid of the little holes in the outline between the hand and foot and the hat and mustache.

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Overall this is a very great start! I think it’s got some great potential and is on its way to being a successful modernization.

 

A couple of suggestions I have in addition to those posted above:

 

- I would take the weight of the eyes outline down just a tiny bit, I think it’s just a little too thick as is.

- I would make the line formed by the jersey button front flow with his torso a little more, right now it looks a little caved in and seems to clash a little with the overall movement of the logo.

 

Again, very great start! Keep going with it!

 

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