Darth Brooks Posted March 31, 2020 Share Posted March 31, 2020 I've been working up a concept of the Rams. There are a number of variants that I've been kicking around and I want to hear some opinions. Which do you like the best? What features work best? Is the underlying drawing work as a logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted March 31, 2020 Share Posted March 31, 2020 34 minutes ago, Darth Brooks said: I've been working up a concept of the Rams. There are a number of variants that I've been kicking around and I want to hear some opinions. Which do you like the best? What features work best? Is the underlying drawing work as a logo? EDIT: WAIT I CAN SEE THEM I feel like some work needs to be given to underneath the horn, not sure what but it makes the far left feel detached from the logo. I'd personally go with the bottom left, and try to make the tips of the horns sharper as well. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted April 1, 2020 Share Posted April 1, 2020 Second row, second to last one is my favorite — switch the eye from white to gold and it's a winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted April 1, 2020 Share Posted April 1, 2020 The one in the dead center.. mouth, light grey shading, light yellow eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaytavo305 Posted April 1, 2020 Share Posted April 1, 2020 I like the bottom row first 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted April 1, 2020 Share Posted April 1, 2020 At first, I thought it was a steer skull. And then I realized that would make an awesome logo for the Texans. 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES | 5th in HEISMAN | 7th in DRAFTS | 8th in ALL-AMER | 7th in WINS | 4th in BOWLS | 1st in SELLOUTS | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Brooks Posted April 2, 2020 Author Share Posted April 2, 2020 On 3/31/2020 at 6:59 PM, Htown1141 said: EDIT: WAIT I CAN SEE THEM I feel like some work needs to be given to underneath the horn, not sure what but it makes the far left feel detached from the logo. I'd personally go with the bottom left, and try to make the tips of the horns sharper as well. Like so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted April 2, 2020 Share Posted April 2, 2020 Much better! I'd say the next thing is work on the mouth. right now, everything else feels dynamic and sleek, but the mouth and the subsequent area around it looks kinda dorky, if that makes sense. keep refining and try to create something that fits with an otherwise really sleek look I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted April 2, 2020 Share Posted April 2, 2020 I like this version, but with the lighter gold eyes (the one dead center). In general, I prefer eyes over no eyes throughout. As an extreme variant, I like the all-gold Ram as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Brooks Posted April 3, 2020 Author Share Posted April 3, 2020 10 hours ago, Htown1141 said: Much better! I'd say the next thing is work on the mouth. right now, everything else feels dynamic and sleek, but the mouth and the subsequent area around it looks kinda dorky, if that makes sense. keep refining and try to create something that fits with an otherwise really sleek look I spent today working on the horns, cleaning up the shape and this is the current version with a variation on the Rams wordmark. You're right, the mouth is just kinda there and I'll think about what to do with it. I might pull back the horn a little bit on the left side of the face too. It just hit me how close it is to the shadow line. A few tweaks here and there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Brooks Posted April 13, 2020 Author Share Posted April 13, 2020 Someone said that the Ram needed to be angrier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATolly66 Posted April 18, 2020 Share Posted April 18, 2020 The bottom left corner is amazing! Who know that a little blue dot would make that much of a difference Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted April 18, 2020 Share Posted April 18, 2020 Bottom left one rules. I hope that one wins trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Brooks Posted April 20, 2020 Author Share Posted April 20, 2020 There's not much to win. Anyways, I messed with the shape of the head and the shading a bit, fixing a couple of things that bugged me the more I looked at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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