GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 24, 2020 Share Posted April 24, 2020 :deleted concepts: check next page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted April 24, 2020 Share Posted April 24, 2020 The second league logo works best. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josef_Bretones Posted April 24, 2020 Share Posted April 24, 2020 I like the shape of the shield and the arrangement of the elements too, but I think you want to represent many things. The 32-pointed star is slightly lost because the tips are very narrow. The colors of the bars make a strange mix and finally the font is too ordinary. I would put an 8-pointed star (for each division) and four bars (for each conference). I would use the second logo with the 8-pointed star with the ball and a neutral color in the background (not black) that represents the entire league and a less serious font (Gotham, Helvetica, Futura condensed ...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 25, 2020 Author Share Posted April 25, 2020 :deleted concepts: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MilSox Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 #3 looks the most like the logo for an actual league. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 #3 looks great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mvdbutler Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 Cool Idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 25, 2020 Author Share Posted April 25, 2020 I filled in the blank space beside the letters and added a rudimentary bevel to the outline. I think it makes it look slightly more "authentic", but I'm not a fan of bevels so I'd like to know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 47 minutes ago, Maroon&Gold said: I filled in the blank space beside the letters and added a rudimentary bevel to the outline. I think it makes it look slightly more "authentic", but I'm not a fan of bevels so I'd like to know what you think Much, much better!!!!!!! The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josef_Bretones Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 2 hours ago, Maroon&Gold said: I filled in the blank space beside the letters and added a rudimentary bevel to the outline. I think it makes it look slightly more "authentic", but I'm not a fan of bevels so I'd like to know what you think Yeah, much better. Why don't you try putting a white outer line on the star to better integrate it between the stripes? Somewhat narrower than blue, of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 25, 2020 Author Share Posted April 25, 2020 36 minutes ago, Josef_Bretones said: Yeah, much better. Why don't you try putting a white outer line on the star to better integrate it between the stripes? Somewhat narrower than blue, of course. How's that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josef_Bretones Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 15 minutes ago, Maroon&Gold said: How's that? Right. But in a little thicker and completely centered. That's not what those little triangles look like. I think it integrates much better that way, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 25, 2020 Author Share Posted April 25, 2020 22 minutes ago, Josef_Bretones said: Right. But in a little thicker and completely centered. That's not what those little triangles look like. I think it integrates much better that way, right? Like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josef_Bretones Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 Yeaaaah! Muy bien! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 2 hours ago, Maroon&Gold said: Like this? Much better, but I think you might need to add one more red stripe on the outer edge and have a red stripe right down the middle with the star bisecting it. Right now, the way the white outline on the star intersects with the white stripe, it looks like an optical illusion where the star is bending that white stripe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 25, 2020 Author Share Posted April 25, 2020 9 hours ago, darkpiranha said: Much better, but I think you might need to add one more red stripe on the outer edge and have a red stripe right down the middle with the star bisecting it. Right now, the way the white outline on the star intersects with the white stripe, it looks like an optical illusion where the star is bending that white stripe. Like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 Much better. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostOfNormMacdonald Posted April 25, 2020 Author Share Posted April 25, 2020 I tried doing a R/W/R striping pattern to kinda tie in Canada and simplify it a little bit I think I'm down to these two and the 5 striped one in my last post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 I like the one on top. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josef_Bretones Posted April 25, 2020 Share Posted April 25, 2020 14 minutes ago, neo_prankster said: I like the one on top. +1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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