OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 6, 2020 Share Posted May 6, 2020 Hello there! This is something totally different for me. I have almost exclusively worked on hockey/NHL concepts over the years and have never really taken the time to branch out of my comfort zone. With quarantine hitting week 8 here in Ohio, I figured that now would be a great time to try out something new and begin a new design project. Similar to my last project, I wanted to give each team four uniform options, with the caveat that they still must follow the NFL/Nike's guidelines of using one helmet (can use interchangeable decals and facemasks). Each team will have a Light, Dark, Color Rush, and Throwback or Alternate option (all of the pants options can be interchangeable, too). Teams will be posted in no particular order (this is still very much a work in progress), but will be posted one division at a time. Up first, the team with the #1 pick in this year's draft: Cincinnati Bengals (and shameless plug...if you missed my last project, check out the thread here:) My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted May 6, 2020 Share Posted May 6, 2020 Good start, but there are some things you could tweak. For one, the frequency of the striping is different across the mediums. Even though the tiger striping theme is consistent, the actual volume of striping is not, so the uniform looks a bit disjointed -- almost as if someone took the Bengals 80s, 90s, and 2000s unioforms and mixed and matched them. I'd go back, pay attention to the application scale, just as you would with classic stripes. Also, as much as I would like the Bengals to drop the Reebok font they have, plain white block isn't really inspiring. Simple uniforms look great but gain their uniqueness from the simplest things and that includes the font choice. I'd go with something more block custom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 6, 2020 Author Share Posted May 6, 2020 1 hour ago, Brave-Bird 08 said: Good start, but there are some things you could tweak. For one, the frequency of the striping is different across the mediums. Even though the tiger striping theme is consistent, the actual volume of striping is not, so the uniform looks a bit disjointed -- almost as if someone took the Bengals 80s, 90s, and 2000s unioforms and mixed and matched them. I'd go back, pay attention to the application scale, just as you would with classic stripes. Also, as much as I would like the Bengals to drop the Reebok font they have, plain white block isn't really inspiring. Simple uniforms look great but gain their uniqueness from the simplest things and that includes the font choice. I'd go with something more block custom. Thanks for the feedback! I've made some changes to the pant stripe to make it more consistent with the shoulder striping. I decided to leave the block font alone, as I was going for a similar feel to both their current color rush uniforms, as well as the simple look of LSU's football uniforms (which inspired this set, because, ya know, Joe Burrow) My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted May 6, 2020 Share Posted May 6, 2020 I think your color balancing is a little off, especially on the away jersey. I'd remove the black on the sleeve cuffs. I'd also try thickening up the numbers and outlining them with orange, on both uniforms. I'd also replace the B logo with the wordmark under the collar, that's one of the things that bugs me most on our current uniforms. Finally I would drop the orange pants on the alternate and replace them with white ones. The throwback I'm indifferent on, I think a Super Bowl throwback would be cool but that's basically what the uniforms already are. Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsfan7 Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 That throwback jersey seems a little to similar to the Browns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MilSox Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 51 minutes ago, sportsfan7 said: That throwback jersey seems a little to similar to the Browns That's the point. Paul Brown had a basic uniform design he liked to use and brought it with him to Cincinnati. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hawkeye15 Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 I dig the simplicity of it and the I think the shoulder stripes works well for the Bengals. One minor nitpick. I don't think the B logo on the chest works well. On the black jersey, orange never touches white... except for on that logo. That chest logo just stands out too much to me. Maybe it's just a personal preference. I do realize that it's hard to fit primary logos onto the uniforms of teams that don't put primary logos on the helmet... the Vikings have this problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brfrank9 Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 I really like your Bengals' concept. I know it's different, and you're getting some pushback on certain things, but I would really hesitate to change anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmick Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 Nice work. I would just reverse the pants on the home and road (black jersey/white pants - white jersey/black pants) and have white or orange topped socks with the black pants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 7, 2020 Author Share Posted May 7, 2020 Let's go up I-71N to the next team in the AFC North: Cleveland Browns My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 I'd swap the pants, all brown is not a good look. I think that throwing white in between the orange stripes would help a lot. So OWOWO on the sleeves and OWO on the pants. Otherwise it's pretty good Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brfrank9 Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 Thanks for sticking with the brown facemask for Cleveland. That's basically the only change that I liked when they modernized their uniforms a few seasons ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 Make the throwback the primary and you're all set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rknig1010 Posted May 7, 2020 Share Posted May 7, 2020 Both the browns and the bengals are great. A step up for both. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsfan7 Posted May 8, 2020 Share Posted May 8, 2020 17 hours ago, NicDB said: That's the point. Paul Brown had a basic uniform design he liked to use and brought it with him to Cincinnati. I know, but you don't want your throwbacks to look like one of your biggest rivals, even if that was the inspiration for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YungMan Posted May 8, 2020 Share Posted May 8, 2020 The Browns uniform is pretty ugly, which is curious because the throwback you made looks great. I'm not sure why you chose to keep the ugly CLEVELAND workmark on the jersey and that diarrhea brown color you chose is pretty rough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SEANL Posted May 8, 2020 Share Posted May 8, 2020 I dig the Bengals concept. They really need to go simple if they are going to keep striping on the uniform. The striping PLUS the bizarre paneling they have now just doesn't work IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 9, 2020 Author Share Posted May 9, 2020 Next team up: Pittsburgh Steelers My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jymp Posted May 9, 2020 Share Posted May 9, 2020 Great job getting rid of the rounded numbers for the Steelers, put the yellow pants with the away jersey, it's done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted May 9, 2020 Author Share Posted May 9, 2020 1 hour ago, Jymp said: Great job getting rid of the rounded numbers for the Steelers, put the yellow pants with the away jersey, it's done. thanks! Keep in mind, all of the pants options are interchangeable, so the yellow pants do go with the white jerseys My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.