Sidney Posted July 17, 2020 Share Posted July 17, 2020 Hey guys, I was working on a gatorade rebrand, and I would like some feedbacks/advices on what I can do to improve if necessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rorinator Posted July 17, 2020 Share Posted July 17, 2020 I like it a lot, only feedback I have is that it resembles a 9 (at least to me) because of the angle of the G. Perhaps you could seperate the distance between the the bolt and the curved end to make it more 'G-like' and less '9-like'. Besides that, I really like the concept, colors and font! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 18, 2020 Author Share Posted July 18, 2020 13 hours ago, rorinator said: I like it a lot, only feedback I have is that it resembles a 9 (at least to me) because of the angle of the G. Perhaps you could seperate the distance between the the bolt and the curved end to make it more 'G-like' and less '9-like'. Besides that, I really like the concept, colors and font! Thanks I'll see what I can do. Wasn't sure for the font but yeah it's clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 18, 2020 Author Share Posted July 18, 2020 Here is an update, I'm not a big fan of the the A because I feel like this separation is pretty common if you take a look on what other ppl have tried. But I've tried to separate with differents ways and explore some options. I think I'm heading to a good direction. If I can get more C&C in order to see what other are reading etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted July 18, 2020 Share Posted July 18, 2020 My first thought is that this looks more like a lowercase q than it does an uppercase G. I think the italicized letter is what makes it look less like a G. What would it look like as standard text? "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cujo Posted July 19, 2020 Share Posted July 19, 2020 12 hours ago, Sidney said: Here is an update, I'm not a big fan of the the A because I feel like this separation is pretty common if you take a look on what other ppl have tried. But I've tried to separate with differents ways and explore some options. I think I'm heading to a good direction. If I can get more C&C in order to see what other are reading etc. C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
8993 Posted July 20, 2020 Share Posted July 20, 2020 I'd suggest lowering the thunderbolt and bringing it in a bit to reduce the negative space within the G. It looks like a C with a thunderbolt right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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