Liladam26 Posted August 27, 2020 Share Posted August 27, 2020 My only very minor critique of the helmet is the lack of orange from the side views, but seriously that helmet is gold. I think that dark gray can make the aqua and orange pop, it's a nice addition, you're definitely onto something here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted August 28, 2020 Share Posted August 28, 2020 They grey feels forced on the home and away but I LOVE that mono-grey alt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christianreitz Posted August 28, 2020 Share Posted August 28, 2020 I love the presentation of your concepts. I love the Ravens and Dolphins unis. Some critiques i have would be: Ravens - keep the number font but try the gold outline and shadow like the current numbers have. Packers - Wonder what it would look like if you used the more traditional green and gold with the throwback style uniforms. Dolphins - I would consider an orange third jersey with grey accent. i'm imagining Real Madrid 2013. i love the combo Looking forward to the rest of the series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurQlez Posted August 28, 2020 Share Posted August 28, 2020 I like the additional gray color to the Dolphins! But yeah that helmet still needs orange. Without it, the whole package doesn't pop as the present Dolphins design does. How about adding the orange as a water streak? you would only need two of them. One long "crescent-styled" line that goes from the top of the Dolphin's head to near the dorsal fin. The second similar orange line one would go from the far end fin to near the tail. If done right, the lines could give like a negative shaped football. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaytavo305 Posted August 29, 2020 Share Posted August 29, 2020 Dolphins are actually kinda cool. I saw the grey and hated it at first but the more I look at it its really not that bad. I like the pants stripe a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 4, 2020 Author Share Posted September 4, 2020 TENNESSEE TITANS Follow this project on Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted September 5, 2020 Share Posted September 5, 2020 Not a huge fan of the beveled numbers, dosent really go with the flowy Jersey design. Great look besides that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edjb93 Posted September 9, 2020 Share Posted September 9, 2020 That has to be one of the best Titans concept I have ever seen, wayyyyy better than my concept years ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbird669 Posted September 9, 2020 Share Posted September 9, 2020 On 8/25/2020 at 11:49 AM, Brave-Bird 08 said: GREEN BAY PACKERS (Follow this project on Dribbble) This is sweet branding! I'd love to see this set in real life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 10, 2020 Author Share Posted September 10, 2020 TAMPA BAY BUCCANEERS (Follow this project on Dribbble) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted September 10, 2020 Share Posted September 10, 2020 I'm sorry this might be a tough critique, but Pewter and orange really don't work that well together. I think straight up swapping orange for red here would make this concept much better. Outside of that I think the sword inspired design is a bit on the nose. But nothings going to really improve the original pewter look, so I like the different approach. Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karnage84 Posted September 10, 2020 Share Posted September 10, 2020 I am a big fan of most of your work but I have to agree with some of the comments on Tampa. This feels a lot like the job Nike did on the Browns only the Buccaneers edition. This is down to the stripes on the jersey coming in deep to the shadowed number font. The orange also feels a lot like the one the Browns used. The stripes themselves are also reminiscent of the Jets' new(ish) uni's. I do like the sword on the pants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaytavo305 Posted September 10, 2020 Share Posted September 10, 2020 I couldn't wait for your next concept Loved the titans look, and the Bucs are alright, but I think the current color scheme would work better with this design. Orange is too red I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 10, 2020 Author Share Posted September 10, 2020 Thanks for the comments! I went ahead and re-colored the concept in the current color scheme to give more of an in-real-life glimpse at the concept. As far as the direction I went, I always want to push the norms. For me, the challenge I gave myself from the beginning was to take both the orange and pewter and make them work, instead of trying to pick one theme over the other. As far as being compared to the Jets and Browns, I would definitely note that my series is in a vacuum, so while some things may compare to something in real life, I'm building around the idea that those existing elements for other teams are non-existent in this imagined NFL -- so the Jets sleeves don't exist, and the Browns well...I'll leave that up for suspense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted September 10, 2020 Share Posted September 10, 2020 I think that's a lot better! Looks much more like a compromise between the Winston era set to the classic pewter set. Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edjb93 Posted September 11, 2020 Share Posted September 11, 2020 That update kinda reminds me of my Bucs concept years ago: https://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/105653-nfl-mach-speed-concept-uniforms-done-in-paint/?do=findComment&comment=2578004 But mine's overly designed, while yours has a simpler design, by not going with a shoulder yoke of different color. So, two thumbs up from me to yours. The original concept is not bad at all. For me, the shade of orange is getting close to red, not creamsicle orange. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoopsCoach55 Posted September 11, 2020 Share Posted September 11, 2020 13 hours ago, Brave-Bird 08 said: TAMPA BAY BUCCANEERS (Follow this project on Dribbble) For the intent of this in a vaccum, I think you're close to ideal. Flip the color of the numbers on the road White and show off the Home Orange over White pants and I think you have a winner. I'd almost say to use a lighter shade of Orange, like Tennessee Orange, to pop better against the Pewter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karnage84 Posted September 11, 2020 Share Posted September 11, 2020 17 hours ago, Brave-Bird 08 said: Thanks for the comments! I went ahead and re-colored the concept in the current color scheme to give more of an in-real-life glimpse at the concept. As far as the direction I went, I always want to push the norms. For me, the challenge I gave myself from the beginning was to take both the orange and pewter and make them work, instead of trying to pick one theme over the other. As far as being compared to the Jets and Browns, I would definitely note that my series is in a vacuum, so while some things may compare to something in real life, I'm building around the idea that those existing elements for other teams are non-existent in this imagined NFL -- so the Jets sleeves don't exist, and the Browns well...I'll leave that up for suspense. Totally fair on your comments re: feedback. This looks much better. I had zero issues with the number font had they just made them solid as opposed to the clock number styling. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted September 16, 2020 Author Share Posted September 16, 2020 DENVER BRONCOS (Follow this project on Dribbble) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted September 16, 2020 Share Posted September 16, 2020 I think yellow pants should be an option on the road, and their brown pants should have a yellow stripe instead of white. Otherwise I think this a great look, I've never seen something like this done before for the Broncos. I've always loved that color scheme too. Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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