Sidney Posted December 28, 2020 Share Posted December 28, 2020 Hi guys I had that project waiting to be published, here is a personal concept. I want to be able in a near future to make some 3D presentation, It's not 3D yet but I'm working to improve my presentation... what you think? ps: You'll find the rest under the video in the second post, enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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slapshot Posted December 28, 2020 Share Posted December 28, 2020 It may be due to the translation, but you alternate between "Alpine State University" and "Alpines State University". Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted December 28, 2020 Author Share Posted December 28, 2020 9 minutes ago, slapshot said: It may be due to the translation, but you alternate between "Alpine State University" and "Alpines State University". Oh thanks!! Ithe fact that I translate I was paying more attention to mistakes than that... I'll correct that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted December 29, 2020 Author Share Posted December 29, 2020 Everything is correct now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHK Posted December 31, 2020 Share Posted December 31, 2020 I like this as a start, and the Texas outline + initials logo is well done. Regarding the new lobo logo, the nose / eyes area feels awkward. It's hard for me to articulate why, other than it looking "off", but it's possibly due to the right side of the nose (specifically the upper portion comprised of the vertical black lines) feels disproportionate to the left. I can tell the logo is intentionally not symmetrical, but the strong dissymmetry in that area makes it looks ... disfigured maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 1, 2021 Author Share Posted January 1, 2021 14 hours ago, OHK said: I like this as a start, and the Texas outline + initials logo is well done. Regarding the new lobo logo, the nose / eyes area feels awkward. It's hard for me to articulate why, other than it looking "off", but it's possibly due to the right side of the nose (specifically the upper portion comprised of the vertical black lines) feels disproportionate to the left. I can tell the logo is intentionally not symmetrical, but the strong dissymmetry in that area makes it looks ... disfigured maybe? Thanks for the feedback, I'll try few changements to see if it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 1, 2021 Author Share Posted January 1, 2021 17 hours ago, OHK said: I like this as a start, and the Texas outline + initials logo is well done. Regarding the new lobo logo, the nose / eyes area feels awkward. It's hard for me to articulate why, other than it looking "off", but it's possibly due to the right side of the nose (specifically the upper portion comprised of the vertical black lines) feels disproportionate to the left. I can tell the logo is intentionally not symmetrical, but the strong dissymmetry in that area makes it looks ... disfigured maybe? Here are the modifications the new version is on the right side. C&C are appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OHK Posted January 8, 2021 Share Posted January 8, 2021 On 1/1/2021 at 8:57 AM, Sidney said: Here are the modifications the new version is on the right side. C&C are appreciated That's a big improvement IMO, I really like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted January 8, 2021 Author Share Posted January 8, 2021 7 hours ago, OHK said: That's a big improvement IMO, I really like it. Yeah me too! Thanks for your participation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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