LogoFan Posted September 30, 2021 Share Posted September 30, 2021 On 9/12/2021 at 12:22 PM, Sidney said: Here is the final version! I think everything is better the motion, perspective and general feeling. I've done slight modifications : - I've done the right ear shorter + no light on it so it's black... -Played around with the right eye as well. Sidney, I'm not trying to be picky but the logo is still off to me. There's something out of proportion that I can't put my finger on, but it's like my mind is seeing something that's partially cat and partially dog. I'm thinking it may be the top of the head and the ears that reminds me more of a dog barking than a cat roaring. I think you're on the right track, though. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 1, 2021 Author Share Posted October 1, 2021 1 hour ago, LogoFan said: Sidney, I'm not trying to be picky but the logo is still off to me. There's something out of proportion that I can't put my finger on, but it's like my mind is seeing something that's partially cat and partially dog. I'm thinking it may be the top of the head and the ears that reminds me more of a dog barking than a cat roaring. I think you're on the right track, though. Thanks for the feedback! I like getting as much advices and critics possible to get the best of my design. I'll go back to the drawing board Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 1, 2021 Author Share Posted October 1, 2021 Here is the new attempt -Tried to correct the mouth to make it more dynamic -Redesigned the ears. -Reshaped the neck. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted October 1, 2021 Share Posted October 1, 2021 Try having the ears point up a little more - reference how the current Panthers and Jags logos feature the ears curving down and up, like real cats do. 1 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 2, 2021 Author Share Posted October 2, 2021 ok here is an other attempt -2 different mouth angle (left pic the lower jaw is a bit back & on the right it's a bit forward) - Redrawn the ear 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted October 2, 2021 Share Posted October 2, 2021 Definite upgrade on the ear! I prefer the one on the right, personally. I'd also add some more black to the back of the logo so that it follows the curve of the blue stroke more. 1 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 2, 2021 Author Share Posted October 2, 2021 4 hours ago, QCS said: Definite upgrade on the ear! I prefer the one on the right, personally. I'd also add some more black to the back of the logo so that it follows the curve of the blue stroke more. Thanks I also agree that's an upgrade, Yh there is a missing black part behind the neck because I've reshaped it ^^. On 9/30/2021 at 7:14 PM, LogoFan said: Sidney, I'm not trying to be picky but the logo is still off to me. There's something out of proportion that I can't put my finger on, but it's like my mind is seeing something that's partially cat and partially dog. I'm thinking it may be the top of the head and the ears that reminds me more of a dog barking than a cat roaring. I think you're on the right track, though. Is it better? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 4, 2021 Author Share Posted October 4, 2021 After a lot of revisions here the final version. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted October 4, 2021 Share Posted October 4, 2021 The one that that's throwing me off is the white whiskers. Nowhere else on the logo does blue touch white and it's distracting in a bad way. I'd also add just a touch more black in the bottom left of the logo, so it follows the curve a little more. Those are my only two suggestions, everything else here is wonderful, much better than when you started. 1 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoFan Posted October 4, 2021 Share Posted October 4, 2021 17 hours ago, Sidney said: After a lot of revisions here the final version. Much better. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 4, 2021 Author Share Posted October 4, 2021 Ok guys, now I'm back with the new whiskers colors version! And the neck improvement! Tada... 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted October 5, 2021 Share Posted October 5, 2021 Very solid! The right whiskers could be a little thicker I think but other than that it's brilliant and I'd be more than ok with that as the Panthers' official logo. 2 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 5, 2021 Author Share Posted October 5, 2021 17 minutes ago, QCS said: Very solid! The right whiskers could be a little thicker I think but other than that it's brilliant and I'd be more than ok with that as the Panthers' official logo. That's a big W considering the fact that at the beginning you said that it was solid but you couldn't say that you'd prefer it over the current logo. I'm really proud of this one, I've tried so many time to improve it because of your constructive critics guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 5, 2021 Author Share Posted October 5, 2021 Here is the one whit thicker right whiskers. 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted October 5, 2021 Share Posted October 5, 2021 There it is! Great logo. I'm really liking how it turned out. Wonderful job! Especially big props on taking criticism and turning it around to make better logos. A very important yet underrated skill for designers. 1 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 5, 2021 Author Share Posted October 5, 2021 44 minutes ago, QCS said: There it is! Great logo. I'm really liking how it turned out. Wonderful job! Especially big props on taking criticism and turning it around to make better logos. A very important yet underrated skill for designers. Hope you gonna be there to make me improve my upcoming ideas 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 6, 2021 Author Share Posted October 6, 2021 I'm back at it What you guys think about an eventual blue helmet? I had to do an extra outline in order to create a difference because there is a lot of blue etc. what you think about that idea? would you pick an other outline color? C&C are welcome. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted October 6, 2021 Share Posted October 6, 2021 Definitely want a blue helmet, so an outline is necessary. I like the shape of the white, could we see a black version? 2 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 6, 2021 Author Share Posted October 6, 2021 Here is the version with black outline and the light grey outline on black background. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted October 7, 2021 Author Share Posted October 7, 2021 I was looking for a mockup and I got this one, I think this is better to see how it could really look like 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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