neo_prankster Posted May 22, 2023 Share Posted May 22, 2023 I'm glad to see that the European League of Football was able to bring back the Barcelona Dragons a couple years ago. Here's my take on how the logo should really look IMO: C&C Welcome. 8 1 Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildcomet Posted May 24, 2023 Share Posted May 24, 2023 I like it, it's a good start for sure. If I were to suggest possible changes to try, perhaps thicken the lines you have inside the ears and nose a bit to show that they're holes rather than just creases like the wrinkles above the nose, and possibly fill in the yellow triangle inside of the back cheek with green to make that area a bit less busy and cleaner for when the logo is smaller. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 24, 2023 Author Share Posted May 24, 2023 4 hours ago, Wildcomet said: I like it, it's a good start for sure. If I were to suggest possible changes to try, perhaps thicken the lines you have inside the ears and nose a bit to show that they're holes rather than just creases like the wrinkles above the nose, and possibly fill in the yellow triangle inside of the back cheek with green to make that area a bit less busy and cleaner for when the logo is smaller. How about the curly cue next to the ear? Is that too close to the ear lobe? Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 24, 2023 Author Share Posted May 24, 2023 @Wildcomet Also, should I bring back the red lips from the original logo? Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 25, 2023 Author Share Posted May 25, 2023 How's this, guys? C&C Welcome. 3 Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted May 26, 2023 Share Posted May 26, 2023 I always feel like your logos need thicker lines .. great drawings but don’t give me the logo vibe 1 Quote THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 28, 2023 Author Share Posted May 28, 2023 On 5/25/2023 at 7:01 PM, BengalErnst said: I always feel like your logos need thicker lines .. great drawings but don’t give me the logo vibe How's this? C&C Welcome. 4 1 Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted May 29, 2023 Share Posted May 29, 2023 Honestly it’s a start and looks much better imo. Still lacking somewhere tho Quote THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted May 29, 2023 Share Posted May 29, 2023 that's much better 1 Quote @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 30, 2023 Author Share Posted May 30, 2023 On 5/28/2023 at 7:07 PM, BengalErnst said: Honestly it’s a start and looks much better imo. Still lacking somewhere tho Which areas do you think I should fix? Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildcomet Posted May 30, 2023 Share Posted May 30, 2023 19 minutes ago, neo_prankster said: Which areas do you think I should fix? A couple things that you could try would be going for a bit more consistency in the thickness of some of the lines; I noticed some variance in the thickness around the ear, mouth and eyes. One thing to consider may be adding back in the black from the original- or introducing a darker red or green- inside the mouth to help separate the tongue from the lips. Something about the perspective of the inside of the mouth seems a bit off to me, and I think the lack of a clear tongue or separation of it from the lips might be why. I agree with the others that this is looking better than the first you shared for sure. Tweaking those couple of things could put it over the top. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted May 30, 2023 Author Share Posted May 30, 2023 2 hours ago, Wildcomet said: A couple things that you could try would be going for a bit more consistency in the thickness of some of the lines; I noticed some variance in the thickness around the ear, mouth and eyes. One thing to consider may be adding back in the black from the original- or introducing a darker red or green- inside the mouth to help separate the tongue from the lips. Something about the perspective of the inside of the mouth seems a bit off to me, and I think the lack of a clear tongue or separation of it from the lips might be why. I agree with the others that this is looking better than the first you shared for sure. Tweaking those couple of things could put it over the top. How's this? Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted June 12, 2023 Author Share Posted June 12, 2023 Bump. Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted June 12, 2023 Author Share Posted June 12, 2023 Made a few revisions to the ear and cheekbone. C&C Welcome. 5 Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted June 13, 2023 Share Posted June 13, 2023 I think the newest version with the black strokes looks fantastic. Maybe you could include some green in the logo itself by putting it somewhere in the mouth, nostrils, or eye. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted June 14, 2023 Share Posted June 14, 2023 This variation is so much better than where it previously started. Waiting for you to take on another old nfl Europe logo Quote THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted June 14, 2023 Author Share Posted June 14, 2023 18 minutes ago, BengalErnst said: This variation is so much better than where it previously started. Waiting for you to take on another old nfl Europe logo Which one would you like to see? I plan to do the Galaxy at some point, but that one might take me a few tries before I get it to your liking. I might do Scotland, Amsterdam or London first. Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BengalErnst Posted June 14, 2023 Share Posted June 14, 2023 Amsterdam was actually the first to come to mind Quote THE Xtreme Fantasy Football League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted June 15, 2023 Author Share Posted June 15, 2023 On 6/13/2023 at 9:11 PM, BengalErnst said: Amsterdam was actually the first to come to mind Here's a work in progress for the Admirals as I expand this into a series. C&C Welcome. 3 Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted June 15, 2023 Author Share Posted June 15, 2023 Bump. I put up the unfinished Admiral concept because I wasn't sure if I should keep the green from the original or just stick with the orange and navy. After I get done with Amsterdam, I'd like to hear what team you guys want me to do next. I might do the London Monarchs, but their original logo had a timelessness that makes me too squeamish to mess with it too much. Quote The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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