AAO Posted October 31, 2004 Posted October 31, 2004 Warming up to Illustrator: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble
Puckguy14 Posted October 31, 2004 Posted October 31, 2004 I'm kinda iffy on the logos, but the uniform design absolutely kicks butt! 2004 San Jose Sharks 7th Man Fan of the Year San Jose Gold Miners - 4x Lombardi Cup Champions
AAO Posted October 31, 2004 Author Posted October 31, 2004 thanks...i personally like the tertiary with the ball and wings that says atlanta hawks Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble
chapi Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 i like the primary logo. the secondary i don't think is a hawk more of another bird but i'm not sure what it is. tertiary is good but i think the ball should be yellow instead of white.uniforms are great too except of the yellow one where i don't like the ATL lettering. the shorts look great in whitee and yellow not sure if i like red shorts...overall very good concept... www.dap-studio.pl
scooter13 Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 Very nice job AAO. That's two in a row. (Meaning your Suns package was cool, too.) Detroit Dragons - 2010 ULL Gait Cup ChampionsDetroit Cougars - 2010 and 2011 WAFA Wills Cup Champions
AAO Posted November 1, 2004 Author Posted November 1, 2004 thanks guys...oh and i just realized on the side view of the shorts for the home set, i forgot to make the back of the side paneling curl back around like it is on the back view. oops... Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble
ColeJ Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 the A in your primary logo looks a lot like avenger's personal logo...that being said, i'm not crazy about the logos, but i'd buy that alternate jersey in a second. that's freakin' sweet.
vicfurth Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 Those're oh, so nice. I really like the chili/cheese alternate. Great work.
slapshot Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 Your uniform design is awesome! The yellow is not nearly as ugly as it could be, considering the color scheme. It gets a little busy at the bottom of the side of the shorts with your wing/ball logo though...something that would fit inside the center panel would work better, or put a thicker outline around what's already there so it is more visible. I like the "A" inside the main logo, maybe by itself it could work as the logo behind the collar, or on the shorts.The choice of fonts could be better. You did great styling with it, but I had a hard time reading it because of the font. It's illegible at a smaller size unless there's a contrasting color outlining it. Red next to white and yellow next to black make it more readable, but if it were more legible the whole package would be that much better. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016
-kj Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 I think I'd like the jerseys better were there not that negative space on the side; rather, it'd look great if it were filled all the way around the side. Also, the winged alternate logo looks cramped in that space; what about using the winged A from the main logo as the logo on the shorts? Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio  POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev.
wheateater Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 That's crunk! Yeeeeeaaahhh!!! WHAT?!!!!! Peace up, A-Town down...Sweet. Wagner Athletic Group11-2 Saskatoon Steeds (WAFL)-NFL-2014 Western Conference Champions / 8-5 Calgary Pronghorns (TNFF)-CFL-2014 Confederation Cup XI Champions14-6-2 Saskatoon Yellowheads (XHL)-NHL-1st, Gretzky Conference / 5-4-0 Saskatoon Czars (MLH)-AHL-T2nd, Calder Conference7-1-6 VfL Dortmund (Weltliga)-Bundesliga-3rd, League / 5-1-5 West End AFC (WFL)-EPL-T5th, League14-7 Saskatoon Sheiks (AA)-MLB-2014 Founder's Cup Champions
slapshot Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 That's crunk! Yeeeeeaaahhh!!! WHAT?!!!!! Peace up, A-Town down...Sweet. I have absolutely no idea what you just wrote... Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016
pcgd Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 That's crunk! Yeeeeeaaahhh!!! WHAT?!!!!! Peace up, A-Town down...Sweet. I have absolutely no idea what you just wrote... Alow me to translate what I like to call...liljohnese.That logo is very well drawn. I'm also attracted to those stellar jersey concepts. I hope you have a good day and Atlanta is the best town there is.Nice.
Discrim Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 That's crunk! Yeeeeeaaahhh!!! WHAT?!!!!! Peace up, A-Town down...Sweet. I have absolutely no idea what you just wrote... Alow me to translate what I like to call...liljohnese.That logo is very well drawn. I'm also attracted to those stellar jersey concepts. I hope you have a good day and Atlanta is the best town there is.Nice. hey look, comedy cus this one's liek OHHHH BAYBEEE!!!!! no holdin! no holdin! got handles like mah gawdsun da Professa!the moral of the story: no more mixtape translation: good logo set, good uni style, but PLEASE make the numbers legible, you might as well have gone with those old spurs black jerseys, with black lettering trimmed in white. A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull
DarthMan Posted November 1, 2004 Posted November 1, 2004 thanks...i personally like the tertiary with the ball and wings that says atlanta hawks too similar to the blazers- other than that "We have nothing to fear except fear itself."
AAO Posted November 2, 2004 Author Posted November 2, 2004 yea it is a little similar...didnt even think abuot that...but theirs is wings of fire. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble
Cyclopsis Joe Posted November 2, 2004 Posted November 2, 2004 Again, it's hard to read "Hawks". I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me.
Carter23 Posted November 2, 2004 Posted November 2, 2004 thanks...i personally like the tertiary with the ball and wings that says atlanta hawks yeah i like that logo a lot too... but otherwise, i think the hawks have the best unis in the nba and i wouldn't touch em
Mings Posted November 2, 2004 Posted November 2, 2004 i think there are too many outlines, and it makes the jerseys and wordmark look jumbled
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