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This one bears a striking resemblance to Miami of Ohio's Redhawks logo. That being said, it's a nice jersey, but the logo might need some tweaking because, to me, it looks like the Redhawks' long lost brother, only facing the other way...

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This one bears a striking resemblance to Miami of Ohio's Redhawks logo. That being said, it's a nice jersey, but the logo might need some tweaking because, to me, it looks like the Redhawks' long lost brother, only facing the other way...

as soon as i finished it i said that it looked like Miami's logo...i figure since i made it and its the first thing ive done in a while, ill show it anyway.

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i cuold still use some comments on the logo(not how it looks like the Miami Logo), as i dont think my logos have been strong lately.

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What is the patch located on the right side of the jersey?

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I'm not keen on the grey sleeves on the road jersey, think it'd look better if they were the same color as the rest of the jersey.

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I'm not keen on the grey sleeves on the road jersey, think it'd look better if they were the same color as the rest of the jersey.

accually i like the grey. sort of NY giants like.

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hawk needs a larger beak, and i dont think he will show up all that great if both he and the helmet are red. what about a silver helmet and yellow beak?

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The use of color seems really disjointed to me, preventing everything from cohering. For instance, the primary logo has no yellow, but it's really prominent in the jersey. Also, on the home jersey, white is only found on the number, and it looks out of place to me.

I'd also suggest seperating the yellow and silver with black. They wash together, IMO.

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The use of color seems really disjointed to me, preventing everything from cohering. For instance, the primary logo has no yellow, but it's really prominent in the jersey. Also, on the home jersey, white is only found on the number, and it looks out of place to me.

I'd also suggest seperating the yellow and silver with black. They wash together, IMO.

oh, i meant for the eye to be yellow .... like this -

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some of me says cool

but some of me says done before

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This has potential. First thing I'd do is fix the jagged detailing in the red-where it looks like a little arm or flipper hanging down.

I might pull down the black point under the beak a bit. This is an interesting shape, but it needs to make a little more sense.

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I agree on the helmet logo--it blends in too much--other than that--

it looks very nice--I'd buy one if this were my team for sure...

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