Dan12020 Posted January 20, 2005 Posted January 20, 2005 These are just two more of my re-designs. First are the Kings, I have always liked those ill-fated white alternate jerseys from the '96 season, so I thought I would bring a part of it back with the "Burger" King on the front.Second: My Flyers design isn't so great I just can't get a good font to go on the front, but this one I liked the best. If anyone has any suggestions on how to make these better, PLEASE let me know, cause I want a lot of suggestions and help.ThanksAlright I changed the colors on the Kings Jersey, and I updated the Flyers jersey, with modified striping so it's not so copy-catish and I put in the logo instead of the lettering. Hope these look better. Please let me know.Alright I edited the kings jersey and added the horizontal stripes.
CC97 Posted January 20, 2005 Posted January 20, 2005 This is more of a "combine a bunch of jerseys together" --- Chris Creamer Founder/Editor, SportsLogos.Net "The Mothership" • News • Facebook • X/Twitter • Instagram
Dan12020 Posted January 20, 2005 Author Posted January 20, 2005 Yeah, well I am just starting out, and I wanted to see if I could do this stuff. Sorry if it is not all original, but my art skills are not the greatest in the world. Plus, I am having a hard time using photoshop.
jamesjduncan Posted January 20, 2005 Posted January 20, 2005 I'm gonna keep it short on the Kings piece. It looks like something from a PSOne game. I'm sorry, i'm just not a fan. The Flyers jersey has potential. I like the striping. It's very flashy, and a nice break from the solid, relatively traditional pieces the Flyers have always worn. Couple ideas. Go with a logo on the front of that. With the angle that your wordmark is cut at, it's not going to look centered. Also, center your wordmark. It's way off dude. Take a look at some other people's concepts in terms of how the fonts lay out, and you will get a better idea of what yours should look like. Your stuff is good man. Keep pushin on this, you'll get it.
DarthMan Posted January 20, 2005 Posted January 20, 2005 why are thi knigs colors so off? "We have nothing to fear except fear itself."
Stampman Posted January 21, 2005 Posted January 21, 2005 This is more of a "combine a bunch of jerseys together" Thought so too--still the Kings one has potential--The Flyers uses a very identifiable template--so maybe try a variation on it... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here."
Mings Posted January 21, 2005 Posted January 21, 2005 some wise words..... simplicity in in a sense perfection (john powson) and less is more (ludwig mies van der rohe)
Dan12020 Posted January 21, 2005 Author Posted January 21, 2005 Yeah, I know that jerseys sometimes, look better when simple, but I like to see what fancy jerseys look like. But hopefully they look better now that I have changed them.
Cashcleaner Posted January 21, 2005 Posted January 21, 2005 What prog are you using? It does look a little rough around the edge, but I think the Kings jersey looks nay bad at all. Not sure about the diagonal lines, though. MAybe try just haveing them horizontal and seeing how it looks. Thanks go to Eddie010 for the Signature and Avatar. Nice work, mate!
Dan12020 Posted January 21, 2005 Author Posted January 21, 2005 Well, right now I am using a lot of paint, because I can't quite figure everything out in photoshop.
Frenchie Posted January 21, 2005 Posted January 21, 2005 Well, right now I am using a lot of paint, because I can't quite figure everything out in photoshop. Nothing wrong with using MS Paint, just be conscious of the coulours you use, that they are part or a 256 palette.Also consider the practicality of Producing those shirts.I like to do Full Packages now, where I keep Home & Away simple, and go wild on ALTERNATES (just like the Islanders, for example)Keep it up. @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6
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