GMS1122 Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Made for CityofWalrus. comments and criticism always appreciated. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Not bad but how about making the darker orange for the shadowing a little darker? Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cashcleaner Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Looking good! I really like the orangeish-rust you used as the primary colour. Thanks go to Eddie010 for the Signature and Avatar. Nice work, mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Is he naked? I think some semblance of "acoutrements" might be needed. Otherwise, the only thing I would do is make the shading a little darker or the highlights a little lighter, just to add some contrast.Otherwise, fantabrilliams!istic Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 i have the same Brilliams! C&C as Jp..... excellent work, very well executed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthMan Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 give the man some underpants!other than that, cool beans "We have nothing to fear except fear itself." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 20, 2005 Author Share Posted January 20, 2005 colors updated slightly, thanks for the comments guys, keep em coming!as for the underpants, it made him look like a porfessional wrestler, which i wasnt going for...and what does a devil wear anyway!? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pcgd Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 I like it! I wonder if you could work an SJ into the pitchfork. Seems like the way you have SJ now could easily be modified to look like a pitchfork. The wordmark...very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilaLogos Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 wow, that's really good!! Is that for a league here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 this logo has gone through a lot, the evolution of it was crazy...good job GMS...looks even better than when i first saw it. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 thats a great logo. keep him naked. great color palette. the strange anles of the serifs are rubbing me wrong, but its flawless besides that. I think the wordmark could be immensely simplified if the serifs were straightened/removed. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cward Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 Nice package GMS. really original. www.skyedesignstudios.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 21, 2005 Author Share Posted January 21, 2005 thanks everyone so far for the replies, i truly appreciate it. A lot of time went into this and im hoping it shows.to answer a couple questions:no, its not for a league hereyes. AAO, you are a vaginaand tempest, what do you see as irregular with the serifs? GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 GStr***1122 (10:18:36 PM): but yes, my mom call me gregorythats really cute greg Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted January 21, 2005 Author Share Posted January 21, 2005 GStr***1122 (10:18:36 PM): but yes, my mom call me gregorythats really cute greg i'll let this one go..... SEW IT UP! GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 i noticed it on the S. see how the middle of the S is a different angle than the serifs above and below it. there are just too many different angles for my brain to comprehend. it gives it a blocky, choppy feel to me, but that may just be unique to me. its great nonetheless. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WideRight Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 I like the colors and general concept but I have to ask what exactly he is doing?Looks like the Devil is either winded and taking a knee to get some air, or he is a 3rd stringer kneeling on the sideline during the game. Not exactly dynamic and engaged in the action.What if the Devil was doing the heisman pose? Now that would be pretty decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Buffalo Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 GMS, Overall I like this a lot, there just seems to be something off a bit with the horns. If you look at just the combination of the horns and the face detached from the body it looks more to me like a Bison (Buffalo). A demonic bison mind you but still has the features of an animal. Of course who's to say what features the devil is supposed to have (anyone got a picture of ProLogo)... just kidding I just finished reading that 10 page Oriole thread, whew! I'M Winded.and just my opinion.... RETIRE BRILLIAMS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 That's some amazing work GMS!!!!! I really like the color combo for this logo, but I'm still not convinced with the wordmark. It seems too edgy to blend in with the logo. Four times IHL Nielson Cup Champions - Montréal Shamrocks (2008-2009 // 2009-2010 // 2012-2013 // 2014-2015) Five times TNFF Confederation Cup Champions - Yellowknife Eagles (2009 CC VI // 2010 CC VII // 2015 CC XII // 2017 CC XIV // 2018 CC XV) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 I agree. the wordmark should be restyled. Needs flames, not horns. NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi ΓΔΒ! Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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