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Utah Jazz Retired Number's

#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark Eaton

Retired Number's To Come

#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone

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Utah Jazz Retired Number's

#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark Eaton

Retired Number's To Come

#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone

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Utah Jazz Retired Number's

#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark Eaton

Retired Number's To Come

#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone

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Utah Jazz Retired Number's

#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark Eaton

Retired Number's To Come

#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone

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MonoMan, that's not a bad illustration at all. :grin:

To improve on it as a sports logo, you could make it bolder. Remember that sports logos are often reproduced at small sizes, embroidered, and seen from a distance. For these reasons, they tend to avoid fine detail and have thicker lines.

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Utah Jazz Retired Number's

#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark Eaton

Retired Number's To Come

#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone

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Mono - nice work, dude. I like the way you gave the helmet a shine. Very nice. A little extra effort in the nose to make it look rounded, rather than sqaured, will really help this.

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Alright, I've done a bit of a Windex job here.

Sorry if I deleted some post portions that you think didn't need to go. I tried to preserve the on topic portions of the posts. I also edited a few posts by folks trying in their own way to defuse the situation... know that I edited your post not because it was inappropriate, but because it contained references to the conflict that we're trying to get past here. It is being dealt with at the moderatorial level.

Now, back to monoman's logo!

Monoman... you've done some good work here! I think a few things that have probably been mentioned but I was too lazy to read are... try using heavier lines to make it look bolder. Sacrifice a bit of detail if necessary, but generally I think the detail is close to optimum level.

As per the wordmark, I'd advise against using straightforward bevel effects, and instead create your own. Bevel effects use gradients to simulate the fade of real light... in logos this is not practical. Perhaps highlight spots where light hits with white, but make it crisp and clean. Also, heavier lines would benefit the wordmark as well.

Personally, as per the logo concept, I think to have a head inside the helmet would make it more dynamic, however I respect what you've done here. That's a nasty looking helmet, which helps make for a terrific debut!

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Good job for what you say is your first effort in Ilustrator. I agree with one of the previous non"sanitized for your viewing pleasure" posts...make the outline thicker, it will stand out more.

The shading is a nice touch as well.

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