DawgPacPBH Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 i would like some C/C....am i improving? blah blah peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JQK Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 Test Tickles Stay Tuned Sports Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 Test Tickles well said...first thing that popped into my head was orange balls, with a snake face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeh-see Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 Test Tickles Oh my God!!!!!! You are SO right!!!!! Maybe we should put one of those "If you are over 18 click to enter" things on this post! ~UJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 I can just hear the sports report, Tonight the San Diego Penis will be in action at Viagra Park as they tangle with the Virginia Viginas.  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted February 18, 2005 Author Share Posted February 18, 2005 yeah....so...no? peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erikstoll Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 narrow the snakes head... and its a winner i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DawgPacPBH Posted February 18, 2005 Author Share Posted February 18, 2005 narrow the snakes head... and its a winner i think silly erik...shut the hell up.haha i <3 you. peteschwadel.comTwitter: @peteeeeE-Mail: peteschwadel@gmail.comDribbble! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 This has potential. I used to be guilty of this. Did you draw this out, then scan it, or did you freehand it in Illustrator? I often came up with graphics that have this certain something to them, though I cannot pinpoint what it is, when I just freehanded it. I have ended up with much better results by taking the time to draw, scan, and trace.The snake does not look very aggressive. It is very symmetrical, and there is a lot of flat orange space, making this far less dynamic than it could be. maybe try a 3/4 view, or pick a light source and add some sinister shadows. The eyes in particular seem to lack character. The baloon highlights on the letters seem cartoony, and the paper thin negative areas on the letters themselves make the letters tough to make out, something that the white pinline does not help.Keep going. You have a good start. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randyc Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 it would be awesome if the snake didn't look like nads Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CZzyzx41 Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 yeah....so...no? yes -DanielCheck Out My Podcast! Latest Episode 273: The Color BlinkyLatest Photo Upload: January 7, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian in Boston Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 narrow the snakes head... and its a winner i think As opposed to a "weiner"? I'm sorry. Given JQK's comment, I couldn't resist. Oh... by the way: KCScout, it's vaginas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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