IronChefShark Posted June 21, 2003 Share Posted June 21, 2003 I guess Im in the minority here...but I really dont think the lightning need a change US state flag concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 21, 2003 Share Posted June 21, 2003 i edited one of my logos to have the current lightning colors..i really want to hear your opinions on how to improve it...thank a lot GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 21, 2003 Share Posted June 21, 2003 I think that change is good. The blue is more 'electric' and and more vibrant. Looking better all the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puckcool22 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 thia posta has gotta get a sticky till it is done with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 yeah, this does need a sticky. I like the basic concept of Puckcool's designs 1-4. The only thing that bothers me is that the "stripes" on the end of the sleeves hit are very low. Move them up more, maybe hitting above the elbow area. By doing this you break up all the empty space and make the stripes more visible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 Realize I am only half way through on the first page of this thread, but I had to post this. I am still tweaking this, and thinking about having the bolt not connect to an outline, but come to a point. Any thoughts on this? JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 I like the bottom row better. Just make sure it doesn't get too WNBA logo-ish in the crests curves. I think the bolt should come to a point. The point should probably come outside the crest, just outline it like the rest of the crest so you have one definable shape. Does that make sense? The Lightning once registered a logo that was like a crest, seen on this jersey here:What tampa Registered. I then turned that logo into a crest, seen here:crests . Look on the second link to see what I mean by "one definable shape".Good work STL FANATIC. Simple is good, but these might be a little plain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 Hey STL, I thought of something similar once. The bolt was moved a little to the right inside the shield, and an L was in the top left corner, largely following the curve of the shield. Yours looks good so far, but it's not quite there yet. It needs something more, and I can't pinpoint what that is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 I made a uni concept using nitroseed's original logo. Check it out.Lightning Home Concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 Nice work, shiz! Very nice. Only idea would be to make the back of the silver stripes pointed like the front. Otherwise, very sharp. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 Hey Mockba, it's funny you say that beacause I originally had it pointing on both ends. But it's now fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 Shiz, that looks awesome. However, and no offense, I really don't think it would have the same awesome effect when on the ice. Not a bad starting point though. Plus even though everyone else seems to like it, I don't particularly like Nitro's logo. It's got some good elements though. The elements mine doesn't have, which is way mine isn't as good as it could be. But hey this is why we all work and critique together. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 STL, those arent bad, but i think they might be a little too simple :: and yeah im the one that keeps saying keep it simple, but you have to know the limit GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 Sorry I am late with a comment - I had to mow the grass before the rains hit KCTo 617design - a very clean and exceptional TB jersey. I like the simplicity and the use of the new logo posted by our friends. Keep up the good work.KCScout76 Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowcap30 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 gmS-wow thats a great logo..i think thats the best on of them all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 shiz-that is really nice. I think the entire arm stuff should be moved down so that the numbers and a sleeve logo won't be too close together. Just a thought. I like the number font, it's not outlandish, but not like every other team.Edit: I hope you don't mind, but I made the changes listed above, plus made the colors into black, honolulu blue, and silver. I give credit to you on the linked page.Modified Shiznit Design If you are uncomfortable with me posting a modified version of your work, I will remove the link. I just figured since we're all working together on this project, it would be okay.P.S. I have used up about 82% of my free diskspace. How do I go about paying for more? I'm on geocities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 22, 2003 Share Posted June 22, 2003 gmS-wow thats a great logo..i think thats the best on of them allhaha thanks, i wouldnt really say that, there are some other great logos here. Although i am certainly glad someone thinks i can compete GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted June 23, 2003 Share Posted June 23, 2003 heres some unis i threw together with my logo....electric blue version coming. tell me what you think GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted June 23, 2003 Share Posted June 23, 2003 similar to shiznit's, but far too plain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted June 23, 2003 Share Posted June 23, 2003 More interesting than the Sharks 3rd, so I think it could fly. I might choose some other colour to highlight some hem/cuff trim, but otherwise they're classy yet unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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