Gary Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 I'm putting together a logo package for my submission into the WA2 or WAFL2 which is the minor league fantasy football for the AF2. But here it isI'm not very good with uniforms so C&C is welcome. I should have a helmet to go with it very soon. Thanks to Discrimihater for the logo's
buffalofan2106 Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 i think the "A" in aggression looks too much like "Fi" it distracted me a little bit... maybe that's just me... good job
Mings Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 isnt that discrim's work on the logos? if so you should make a note, if not then I'm goin back to bed.
buffalofan2106 Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 he did give him credit... under the field, he writes to thank him
Gary Posted March 1, 2005 Author Posted March 1, 2005 isnt that discrim's work on the logos? if so you should make a note, if not then I'm goin back to bed. I did look on the bottom of the page. It says Thanks to Discrimihater for the logo's
Mings Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 isnt that discrim's work on the logos? if so you should make a note, if not then I'm goin back to bed. I did look on the bottom of the page. It says Thanks to Discrimihater for the logo's ok back to bed for me, sorry
Gary Posted March 1, 2005 Author Posted March 1, 2005 isnt that discrim's work on the logos? if so you should make a note, if not then I'm goin back to bed. I did look on the bottom of the page. It says Thanks to Discrimihater for the logo's ok back to bed for me, sorry no problem, go back to bed, and have good nightmares
Discrim Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 i think the "A" in aggression looks too much like "Fi" it distracted me a little bit... maybe that's just me... good job basically, my intent was to make it an A with a hidden F...the "I" is like the white part of the Expos logo, it's not meant to stand alone and is simply part of the A. A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull
buffalofan2106 Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 totally understand what you intended... I was just saying it was distracting me alittle... but still a good job
KennyRock Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 I like a lot about this logo package... but my main observation comes with the main logo. You have a very well-defined soldier face. The helmet has detail to it, and is outline in a black line, and then the eyes, mouth and nose are all clearly noticeable.Then, my eyes drift over to the sword. An abstract grey shape with a white space for the gleam... the sword really stands out without having the same definition as the soldier, helmet and arm. Maybe try the same think black outline separating the hilt from the blade, and around the gleam and the gray space next to it combined make the blade. New York Jets |3-3| First, AFC EastNew York Mets |74-88| Fourth, NL EastNew York Islanders|34-37-11| Fifth, Atlantic DivisionNew Orleans Hornets |21-45| Third, Southwest Division
Discrim Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 in hindsight, I coulda done better in that regard...stupid hindsight A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull
quantum Posted March 1, 2005 Posted March 1, 2005 The uniforms need more white. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity".
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